Rapunzel
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Comment from sunnilicious
This sounded like a very personal poetic piece. Creatively written, but not clear. I'd love more details. Enjoyable to read. Nice work. Have a great week ahead. Hearts & hugs :)
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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This sounded like a very personal poetic piece. Creatively written, but not clear. I'd love more details. Enjoyable to read. Nice work. Have a great week ahead. Hearts & hugs :)
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Very many thanks for your review, Alicia. I appreciate your time and kind words. The poem was meant to be about a father being over-protective and having difficulty in letting go of his daughter. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from ameen786
Unique take on the classic, Repunzel-a new venture from your mighty pen; picture perfect poem, thanks for the delightful treat.
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Unique take on the classic, Repunzel-a new venture from your mighty pen; picture perfect poem, thanks for the delightful treat.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Thank you, ameen. Appreciated. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from estory
I liked this. You created a great sense of the aspirations we have, that seem to be always a step or two beyond us, and the imperfect self we live each day. We can't seem to keep hold of those aspirations. We are left with the imperfect self. estory
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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I liked this. You created a great sense of the aspirations we have, that seem to be always a step or two beyond us, and the imperfect self we live each day. We can't seem to keep hold of those aspirations. We are left with the imperfect self. estory
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Very many thanks for your review, estory. I appreciate your time and comments. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from R. Hiland
I like this. Just enough words. Just enough tongue in cheek. You are much more willing to take risks than I am. I would probably beat this idea to death with adjectives--if I ever came up with the idea in the first place. As usual, good job, sir.
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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I like this. Just enough words. Just enough tongue in cheek. You are much more willing to take risks than I am. I would probably beat this idea to death with adjectives--if I ever came up with the idea in the first place. As usual, good job, sir.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Very many thanks for your review, RH. I appreciate your time and comments. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from dragonpoet
It sounds like this man was overprotective and didn't let his love be herself. That is why shy left. The artwork is cute and fitting.
Keep writng and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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It sounds like this man was overprotective and didn't let his love be herself. That is why shy left. The artwork is cute and fitting.
Keep writng and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Very many thanks for your review, Joan. I appreciate your time and comments. You were one of the few people who understood what I was trying to say in my poem. All good wishes, Tony
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You are most kindly welcome, Tony,
Joan
Comment from royowen
Well done Tony, you seem to have that rare talent that you can anything you want at, I think it's only been the last two years that I've ventured into unknown territory, but the likes of you convinces me it can be done, well done, great post. Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Well done Tony, you seem to have that rare talent that you can anything you want at, I think it's only been the last two years that I've ventured into unknown territory, but the likes of you convinces me it can be done, well done, great post. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Very many thanks for your review, Roy. I appreciate your time and kind words. All good wishes, Tony
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Most welcome
Comment from Mastery
Good job and so original Tony. I liked this in particular:
"saving her from herself,
from the mistakes I'd made
and the terrible consequences
of living."
Take care and be safe my friend. : ) Bob
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Good job and so original Tony. I liked this in particular:
"saving her from herself,
from the mistakes I'd made
and the terrible consequences
of living."
Take care and be safe my friend. : ) Bob
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Very many thanks for your review, Bob. I appreciate your time and good wishes. All the best, Tony
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Good alliteration in PPP--I like the imagery of pen inking in details. I'm very literal-minded and have a hard time with metaphor; are you talking about a woman or a poem? Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Good alliteration in PPP--I like the imagery of pen inking in details. I'm very literal-minded and have a hard time with metaphor; are you talking about a woman or a poem? Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Very many thanks for your review, Liz. I appreciate your time and kind words. The poem was meant to be about a father being over-protective and having difficulty in letting go of his daughter. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Elon Vaughn
This piece is both lighthearted and deep, a difficult combination. I also think there is a sadness about it, which makes me keep reading and rereading it. Maybe the sadness is impossible for the princess to overcome.
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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This piece is both lighthearted and deep, a difficult combination. I also think there is a sadness about it, which makes me keep reading and rereading it. Maybe the sadness is impossible for the princess to overcome.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Very many thanks for your review, Elon. I appreciate your time and comments. All good wishes, Tony
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You are welcome
Comment from Margaret Bednar
The meaning isn't clear but I interpret as a parent protecting a child until one day they (children) do what they do and use their "wings" to fly and make their own mistakes anyway...
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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The meaning isn't clear but I interpret as a parent protecting a child until one day they (children) do what they do and use their "wings" to fly and make their own mistakes anyway...
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Very many thanks for your review, Margaret. I appreciate your time and comments. You were one of the few people who understood what I was trying to say in this poem. All good wishes, Tony
