Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This zombie 5-7-5, Undead, has the right set up and notes that when both the good and bad have over-died, a hybrid death state will simple have to do.

 Comment Written 23-May-2020

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reply by the author on 23-May-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello my friend

Hah hah hah... Funny....

Good job with the entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 writing contest.

The lines connect grammatically so they flow nicely.

I get the best of the poem, no room in hell or heaven so they have to roam... Good twist.

 Comment Written 23-May-2020

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reply by the author on 23-May-2020

Thanks for your review. I'm glad you got what I was saying, it seems some people lost the meaning of the poem.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Woe, this is so expressive it gives almost a human touch to the whole scene. Almost feeling pitty because they are shunned from everywhere. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest .

 Comment Written 23-May-2020

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reply by the author on 23-May-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Ha ha ha, this is a fun zombie write and it has a scary theme when we think of them roaming around the streets, a fun 5-7-5 to scare the pants off us all! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-May-2020

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reply by the author on 23-May-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

With the zombie craze, companies coming out with zombie survival kits and books on how to survive a zombie apocalypse, I think there's humor everywhere where zombies are involved. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-May-2020

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reply by the author on 22-May-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

reply by victor 66 on 23-May-2020

You are most welcome, mystery writer.

Comment from January L'Angelle

Excellent

This is an interesting zombie 575 poem. I like the line: "Overcrowded down below"... below where? I thought for a moment you were talking about heaven and hell then I thought you were talking about earth. The land above and the ground below. I wasn't sure. One is funny, the other is serious. Both work! Well done. Good writing! -January L.

 Comment Written 22-May-2020

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reply by the author on 22-May-2020

Congratulations for being right the first time. Heaven and hell is where I was going although I guess the other would work.

Comment from Diana Kane

Excellent

No choice but to roam. I guess that really says it all. This piece was a fun read. Hard to make zombies come to life so to speak. Great job here. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-May-2020

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reply by the author on 22-May-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Vanny

Excellent

Very interesting Poem I must say. Heaven have extremely a lot of people. I must agree with your words. It is very crowded down here. That is why these obstacles come in our way. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

 Comment Written 22-May-2020

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reply by the author on 22-May-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated

Comment from roof35

Excellent

You got across "scary" with your poem and your picture echoed it. It reminded me why I have never watched a Zombie show. Your structure was good and you made me shiver with only a dozen words. Nice work.

 Comment Written 22-May-2020

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reply by the author on 22-May-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

This Zombie 5-7-5 raises a quiet chuckle in its depiction o f the 'undead'-an interesting poetic reflection and a great visual to illustrate -thanks for sharing

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 Comment Written 22-May-2020

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reply by the author on 22-May-2020

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