Life's Journey
Take your partner and step aboard.14 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
Two by two, we keep the treadmill turning and the cycle of life continues. Nice double meaning with the homophone arc/ark. Good luck with your writing prompt.
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Two by two, we keep the treadmill turning and the cycle of life continues. Nice double meaning with the homophone arc/ark. Good luck with your writing prompt.
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thanks for reviewing, and for mentioning the arc/ark. You are the first to do so - other readers either have not thought it worth mentioning or have not noticed its double meaning, yet the duality is what underpins the whole poem.
Comment from dmt1967
I like the picture and the words. Life is like a rollercoaster. I think your short poem captured the essence of life itself. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Stay safe.
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reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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I like the picture and the words. Life is like a rollercoaster. I think your short poem captured the essence of life itself. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Stay safe.
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Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Aussie
A beautiful illustration to compliment your 5-7-5 poetry. On the wheel of life we are continuously treading. Every day a new chapter in our lives. I liked you simple but strong message. Well done poet.
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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A beautiful illustration to compliment your 5-7-5 poetry. On the wheel of life we are continuously treading. Every day a new chapter in our lives. I liked you simple but strong message. Well done poet.
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Super review, thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write as life continues in its cycle as we are born, procreate and ultimately die and our offspring continue the cycle and it never seems to be broken, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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A poignant write as life continues in its cycle as we are born, procreate and ultimately die and our offspring continue the cycle and it never seems to be broken, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you - life goes on.
