Time to wake up
5/7/5 poem3 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
ameen your 5/7/5 poem 'Time to wake up' what a shame when you were dreaming on the way for peacful eternal rest, the alarm awakes you.
Gert
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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ameen your 5/7/5 poem 'Time to wake up' what a shame when you were dreaming on the way for peacful eternal rest, the alarm awakes you.
Gert
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Gert, I thank you my friend.
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You are welcome ameen786
Gert
Comment from January L'Angelle
This poem is really cute and funny too. I like the ending of the poem about the alarm... its very good. The picture is very cool and reminds me of a dream so it goes well with the poem. I enjoyed this poem. -January L.
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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This poem is really cute and funny too. I like the ending of the poem about the alarm... its very good. The picture is very cool and reminds me of a dream so it goes well with the poem. I enjoyed this poem. -January L.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Hello January L., I appreciate your time and the kind review; glad you like the write; thank you and please be safe.
Comment from oliver818
That's quite funny, dreaming you're on the way to heaven and then you get woken up by an alarm and have to go to work. We've all had that moment of crashing back down to reality after a lovely dream. You captured that nicely here. Have a great day
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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That's quite funny, dreaming you're on the way to heaven and then you get woken up by an alarm and have to go to work. We've all had that moment of crashing back down to reality after a lovely dream. You captured that nicely here. Have a great day
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Hello Oliver, glad you like the write; appreciate your time and the kind review; thank you very much.
