The Black Wall
a 2-4-2 poem23 total reviews
Comment from Diana Kane
Staying within these parameters and getting that kind of emotion across is spectacular. You did an excellent job with this. Thank you for sharing it. Good luck With your writing.
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Staying within these parameters and getting that kind of emotion across is spectacular. You did an excellent job with this. Thank you for sharing it. Good luck With your writing.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thanks so much Diana!! After visiting the sight, it left me with solemn and reflective thoughts on the war. It moved me. I appreciate your comments!!
Melissa
Comment from amada
Oh, it was so unexpected, and very sad. How sometimes lines with just a few limited words have such an impact in the heart...I have read the story many times, but today, in the midst of this chaotic virus, I felt it most.
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reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Oh, it was so unexpected, and very sad. How sometimes lines with just a few limited words have such an impact in the heart...I have read the story many times, but today, in the midst of this chaotic virus, I felt it most.
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Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thanks so much Amada!! After visiting the sight, it left me with solemn and reflective thoughts on the war. It moved me. I appreciate your comments!!
Melissa
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Hello again Melissa,
This is very poignant. I saw one of these walls once in New York, that just went on and on for ever. Very sad. You have captured the essence of the emotion admirably.
Stay Safe, Katherine.
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reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Hello again Melissa,
This is very poignant. I saw one of these walls once in New York, that just went on and on for ever. Very sad. You have captured the essence of the emotion admirably.
Stay Safe, Katherine.
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Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thanks so much Katherine!! After visiting the sight in Washington DC, it left me with solemn and reflective thoughts on the war. It moved me. I appreciate your comments!!
Melissa
