Reflection
A Nonet3 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
I like this very much. I can just imagine this.
This is like an insect hitting your car's window.
You have the right amount of syllables for each line.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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I like this very much. I can just imagine this.
This is like an insect hitting your car's window.
You have the right amount of syllables for each line.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from January L'Angelle
I like this Nonet poem. In reading it, it was beautiful. This was sort of sad. You are calling yourself "an illusion of a great poet" but this is a great poem! I loved it! I think that's what you were saying? It really read in a pretty way. Good work. -January L.
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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I like this Nonet poem. In reading it, it was beautiful. This was sort of sad. You are calling yourself "an illusion of a great poet" but this is a great poem! I loved it! I think that's what you were saying? It really read in a pretty way. Good work. -January L.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from D.S. Knight
1. Did a good job playing with the words to make this a nonet
2. The imagery is appropriate for the thoughts
3. If one is in a hurry to "navigate the waters" a schooner is appropriate
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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1. Did a good job playing with the words to make this a nonet
2. The imagery is appropriate for the thoughts
3. If one is in a hurry to "navigate the waters" a schooner is appropriate
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you!
