The Edge of Convenience
multiverse unity165 total reviews
Comment from BHWatson
I like this. Amen Sister! I became an American Citizen in 2010, and proudly placed my hand over my heart as I did so. Your poem speaks to the greater good of existence. In this day and age, I feel the need to be aligned to the well-being of the planet as a whole.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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I like this. Amen Sister! I became an American Citizen in 2010, and proudly placed my hand over my heart as I did so. Your poem speaks to the greater good of existence. In this day and age, I feel the need to be aligned to the well-being of the planet as a whole.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very kindly for a 6-star review and congratulations on your citizenship! I am grateful that you see my vision of peace within ?The Edge of Convenience?. Best wishes to you and with all of your writing endeavors.
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from Lobber
Hello,
A clever and effective rewrite of the Pledge. I like the phrase ". . . one multiverse
under God, infinitely congenial,. . . Thank you.
- Lobber
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Hello,
A clever and effective rewrite of the Pledge. I like the phrase ". . . one multiverse
under God, infinitely congenial,. . . Thank you.
- Lobber
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you Lobber for such a great review and taking the time to read ?The Edge of Convience?! I am very pleased you enjoyed the poem. Best of luck in all of your writing endeavors.
Opal Rose
Comment from Christine Frey
Oh to live in this space/place you have portrayed here today!! What a delight to read. Thank you for sharing something so deep to self. Congrats on a piece written so wonderfully!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Oh to live in this space/place you have portrayed here today!! What a delight to read. Thank you for sharing something so deep to self. Congrats on a piece written so wonderfully!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you kindly Christine. I am so very pleased you enjoyed the poem. Perhaps one day we will see such a display of harmony. Best wishes to you and in all of your writing endeavors.
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from TPAC
A very creative twist agreeing with these noble standards for equality for all throughout the existence perhaps our world first step towards initial contact between worlds. A wonderful thought in my given opinion.
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A very creative twist agreeing with these noble standards for equality for all throughout the existence perhaps our world first step towards initial contact between worlds. A wonderful thought in my given opinion.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
Comment from Eternal Muse
Your free verse is enchanting, and your words take us to the far away exciting places. I enjoyed the visuals here as well as the presentation.
Good luck in the contest with this interesting entry.
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Your free verse is enchanting, and your words take us to the far away exciting places. I enjoyed the visuals here as well as the presentation.
Good luck in the contest with this interesting entry.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
Comment from robyn corum
Opal,
I can see where you're coming from - and more so as these crazy days pass us by with more and more craziness coming at us from every direction. The news bombards us every day with how we seem to be sooooo different. In your world we would be one, unified, and at peace. I could take a bit of that right now. --sigh-- Nice thoughts. Thanks and good luck!
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Opal,
I can see where you're coming from - and more so as these crazy days pass us by with more and more craziness coming at us from every direction. The news bombards us every day with how we seem to be sooooo different. In your world we would be one, unified, and at peace. I could take a bit of that right now. --sigh-- Nice thoughts. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
Comment from Beverly A McBride
interesting. Seems hopeful. I would want a pledge of honor like this for my multiverse. I like congeniality. I like freedom and neutralism. Much different from partiality, self indulgence and blinders we are so accustomed to here.
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interesting. Seems hopeful. I would want a pledge of honor like this for my multiverse. I like congeniality. I like freedom and neutralism. Much different from partiality, self indulgence and blinders we are so accustomed to here.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
Comment from jaded831
The poem and sentiment are truly worthy of great praise. I can only dream about such a world. This should be our universal theme. Thank you for taking me to a place far from here.
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The poem and sentiment are truly worthy of great praise. I can only dream about such a world. This should be our universal theme. Thank you for taking me to a place far from here.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, The Edge of Convenience, is a cool parody of our Pledge of Allegiance and may soon be our new oath when we head out to Mars.
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This free verse, The Edge of Convenience, is a cool parody of our Pledge of Allegiance and may soon be our new oath when we head out to Mars.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
Comment from roof35
This is a very inspiring and thought-provoking poem. Your illustration pairs nicely with your words. I love the last line as this is what we need today. I can tell the words are from your heart.
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This is a very inspiring and thought-provoking poem. Your illustration pairs nicely with your words. I love the last line as this is what we need today. I can tell the words are from your heart.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
