The Edge of Convenience
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Comment from rjuselius
Such a sweetheart piece of poetry dear opal! I thoroughly agree with you. I find your words actually soothing. Bravo my friend! And a large wow.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
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Such a sweetheart piece of poetry dear opal! I thoroughly agree with you. I find your words actually soothing. Bravo my friend! And a large wow.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I can relate to the theme of universal love and compassion sort of a Zen Buddhist thing going on in this poem well done no doubt the universe would approve of it
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I can relate to the theme of universal love and compassion sort of a Zen Buddhist thing going on in this poem well done no doubt the universe would approve of it
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "infinitely congenial", because that would be wonderful if everyone was pleasent to one another!
The Lord led me to these verses after I read this,
Proverbs 3:13-18 New International Version (NIV)
13 Blessed are those who find wisdom,
those who gain understanding,
14 for she is more profitable than silver
and yields better returns than gold.
15 She is more precious than rubies;
nothing you desire can compare with her.
16 Long life is in her right hand;
in her left hand are riches and honor.
17 Her ways are pleasant ways,
and all her paths are peace.
18 She is a tree of life to those who take hold of her;
those who hold her fast will be blessed.
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My favorite part was, "infinitely congenial", because that would be wonderful if everyone was pleasent to one another!
The Lord led me to these verses after I read this,
Proverbs 3:13-18 New International Version (NIV)
13 Blessed are those who find wisdom,
those who gain understanding,
14 for she is more profitable than silver
and yields better returns than gold.
15 She is more precious than rubies;
nothing you desire can compare with her.
16 Long life is in her right hand;
in her left hand are riches and honor.
17 Her ways are pleasant ways,
and all her paths are peace.
18 She is a tree of life to those who take hold of her;
those who hold her fast will be blessed.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful read, and yes if only we could all come together and see it this way, an excellent free verse poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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What a beautiful read, and yes if only we could all come together and see it this way, an excellent free verse poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 11-Jun-2020
Comment from mvbrooks
The title is inviting and draws your reader's interest. The image makes it seem "other-worldly," and the words seems to promise a very happy place where "freedom and neutralism" are the rule. Thanks for sharing that your muse was the pledge of allegiance.
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The title is inviting and draws your reader's interest. The image makes it seem "other-worldly," and the words seems to promise a very happy place where "freedom and neutralism" are the rule. Thanks for sharing that your muse was the pledge of allegiance.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2020
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem. They are a perfect mach.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem. They are a perfect mach.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 11-Jun-2020
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
I wish I had 6â? to give you. A universal pledge of allegiance, I love it. Such unique and powerful wording. A really beautiful poem. Have a wonderful day.
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I wish I had 6â? to give you. A universal pledge of allegiance, I love it. Such unique and powerful wording. A really beautiful poem. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2020
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Firstly Opal Rose, I love your name! Opal is my birthstone and rose my mothers middle name. This is a great poem and you are highly aware and intelligent when discussing society as it is today and your word play quite ingenious. A fabulous write well done and I look forward to reading more of your work love Meia x
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Firstly Opal Rose, I love your name! Opal is my birthstone and rose my mothers middle name. This is a great poem and you are highly aware and intelligent when discussing society as it is today and your word play quite ingenious. A fabulous write well done and I look forward to reading more of your work love Meia x
Comment Written 11-Jun-2020
Comment from ElPoetry001
Inspiring but not pragmatic.
A utopia that has never been achieved.
It is possible for people to aspire to universal equality, and live their lives accordingly, and derive benefits. However history is against us.
George Orwell wrote, "1984."
Thematically, Nineteen Eighty-Four centres on the consequences of government over reach, totalitarianism, mass surveillance, and repressive regimentation of all persons and behaviours within society.[2][3] More broadly, it examines the role of truth and facts within politics and their manipulation.
That is where we are. Reality is hard to swallow because of the bitter taste of history.
We must seek to achieve your inspiration in this dimension.
Stay well.
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Inspiring but not pragmatic.
A utopia that has never been achieved.
It is possible for people to aspire to universal equality, and live their lives accordingly, and derive benefits. However history is against us.
George Orwell wrote, "1984."
Thematically, Nineteen Eighty-Four centres on the consequences of government over reach, totalitarianism, mass surveillance, and repressive regimentation of all persons and behaviours within society.[2][3] More broadly, it examines the role of truth and facts within politics and their manipulation.
That is where we are. Reality is hard to swallow because of the bitter taste of history.
We must seek to achieve your inspiration in this dimension.
Stay well.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2020
Comment from Earl Corp
This was a very creative take on the pledge of allegiance, I actually recognized that as I read it before I saw your author's notes. Very nice job.
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This was a very creative take on the pledge of allegiance, I actually recognized that as I read it before I saw your author's notes. Very nice job.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
