The Edge of Convenience
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Comment from Cynthia Adams1
Thank you for your honest, loving and urgent poem. I like it a lot and the artwork is amazing.
Yours, as well as couple of other poems today have given me a bit of hope. Some on this site are starting to focus more on unity than divide now and that bodes well for all of us.
I feel like all of us have more power in bringing balance to the world/universe than we understand.
Thank you for your work.
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Thank you for your honest, loving and urgent poem. I like it a lot and the artwork is amazing.
Yours, as well as couple of other poems today have given me a bit of hope. Some on this site are starting to focus more on unity than divide now and that bodes well for all of us.
I feel like all of us have more power in bringing balance to the world/universe than we understand.
Thank you for your work.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The world is complex. It can be interpreted in many ways.
If you want a happy world, look at the bright side. Always be a little bit forgiving. Let go off the negatives. You will find a happy world.
If you are critical, you will always find things that are wrong even though they may not be wrong.
Life is full of choices. You choose your won life.
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The world is complex. It can be interpreted in many ways.
If you want a happy world, look at the bright side. Always be a little bit forgiving. Let go off the negatives. You will find a happy world.
If you are critical, you will always find things that are wrong even though they may not be wrong.
Life is full of choices. You choose your won life.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
Comment from sammielwf
Opal Rose,
You are describing a Heaven of sorts....a haven if you will. Where the heart values of justice, harmony, peace and acceptance are the four cornerstones of the philosophy/credo/universe.
It would be as wonderous a place (consciousness of thought) to live and grow and thrive.
There is no reason not to believe that one day we will ascend there.
It takes a collective consciousness of thought by the human race and beyond to begin the process.
Why not have it start with you? Maybe "The Edge of Convenience" is a first metaphysical step.
Well written and welcome once again to the Fan Story of writers. It is a pleasure to get to know you a little through this write.
Sammielwf
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Opal Rose,
You are describing a Heaven of sorts....a haven if you will. Where the heart values of justice, harmony, peace and acceptance are the four cornerstones of the philosophy/credo/universe.
It would be as wonderous a place (consciousness of thought) to live and grow and thrive.
There is no reason not to believe that one day we will ascend there.
It takes a collective consciousness of thought by the human race and beyond to begin the process.
Why not have it start with you? Maybe "The Edge of Convenience" is a first metaphysical step.
Well written and welcome once again to the Fan Story of writers. It is a pleasure to get to know you a little through this write.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
Comment from Tina Crute
I have to be honest. This was a little out of my comfort zone. But...that's the beauty of this site. We are free to express ourselves. You expressed your feelings well. Any words that encourage others to exist peacefully with each other deserve a nod.
Tina
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I have to be honest. This was a little out of my comfort zone. But...that's the beauty of this site. We are free to express ourselves. You expressed your feelings well. Any words that encourage others to exist peacefully with each other deserve a nod.
Tina
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
Comment from Debra Franze
I love the orginality of your poem, the picture you chose what perfect. Someday this could be a possibility of the universe coming together as one. All of of under one judge and living peacefully together. Sounds heavenly. Great job on a beautiful poem.
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I love the orginality of your poem, the picture you chose what perfect. Someday this could be a possibility of the universe coming together as one. All of of under one judge and living peacefully together. Sounds heavenly. Great job on a beautiful poem.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"The of Convenience", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. With skill, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"The of Convenience", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. With skill, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem is so true. I like the inspiration for it. Your words flow smoothly with great meaning. The color scheme, image, and your words are work together to create a memorable poem. Thanks for the notes, too. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your poem is so true. I like the inspiration for it. Your words flow smoothly with great meaning. The color scheme, image, and your words are work together to create a memorable poem. Thanks for the notes, too. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
Comment from Sanku
Edge of convenience --is an apt title .I feel we are living on an edge these days , no way of knowing where will everything lead.
Loyalty to the galaxy is the best attitude these days .It raises us above narrow parochial concerns that often lead to conflicts.
All the best in your writing.
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Edge of convenience --is an apt title .I feel we are living on an edge these days , no way of knowing where will everything lead.
Loyalty to the galaxy is the best attitude these days .It raises us above narrow parochial concerns that often lead to conflicts.
All the best in your writing.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
I really like the unusual turn you took with the poem! Rewriting the pledge of allegiance - very clever! And I'm very glad you included God in your version because it makes it a much better pledge for all mankind and alien beings in the multiverse!
I enjoyed your fine poem!
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I really like the unusual turn you took with the poem! Rewriting the pledge of allegiance - very clever! And I'm very glad you included God in your version because it makes it a much better pledge for all mankind and alien beings in the multiverse!
I enjoyed your fine poem!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
Comment from angel123
I found your poem very interesting and I thought it was also interesting that it was inspired by the Pledge of Allegience. It flows well with uniqueness and your artwork choice is wonderful. It enhanced your message. Best wishes!
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I found your poem very interesting and I thought it was also interesting that it was inspired by the Pledge of Allegience. It flows well with uniqueness and your artwork choice is wonderful. It enhanced your message. Best wishes!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
