The Edge of Convenience
multiverse unity165 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
Neutralism? That's something to aspire to? Freedom and neutralism are not synonymous. Freedom is individualism. Neutralism is nothing - non thinkers. No challenges to win against someone else (ie. sports, any contest) or have a better idea? And everybody likes everybody? I think you just threw human nature out the window. Utopia, Utopia. Wherefore art thou? The picture you chose goes well with your free verse poem, but I must respectfully disagree with your description of the perfect world.
pome lover
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Neutralism? That's something to aspire to? Freedom and neutralism are not synonymous. Freedom is individualism. Neutralism is nothing - non thinkers. No challenges to win against someone else (ie. sports, any contest) or have a better idea? And everybody likes everybody? I think you just threw human nature out the window. Utopia, Utopia. Wherefore art thou? The picture you chose goes well with your free verse poem, but I must respectfully disagree with your description of the perfect world.
pome lover
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Neutralism is synonymous with justice. Freedom with liberty. The Declaration of Independence reads, ?..with liberty and justice..?. My poem, ?..with freedom and neutralism..?; making their endings one in the same. Naturalism brought me to the synonyms fair-mindedness and neutrality. Neutrality defines ?especially : refusal to take part in a war between other powers?. Freedom does not necessarily insure the theory of individualism. I did throw many flaws of human nature out the window indeed because humans are not the only intelligent form of beings in existence. I respect your opinions. Thank you for your review and feedback.
Best wishes with all your writing endeavors.
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Interesting association between God and sci-fiction - one multiverse
under God, infinitely congenial,
with freedom and neutralism for all.
The poem has consistency. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Interesting association between God and sci-fiction - one multiverse
under God, infinitely congenial,
with freedom and neutralism for all.
The poem has consistency. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for the review. I am pleased you enjoyed the piece. Best wishes to you!
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from January L'Angelle
I like that you used the Pledge of Allegiance as your baseline for this poem. You did keep the "under God" part which pleased me. I suppose we are larger than just one nation and should consider this. Well penned. -January L.
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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I like that you used the Pledge of Allegiance as your baseline for this poem. You did keep the "under God" part which pleased me. I suppose we are larger than just one nation and should consider this. Well penned. -January L.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for the review. I am pleased you enjoyed the piece. Best wishes to you!
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from papa55mike
There are many worlds we exist in. I hope I'm better looking in my others. What a wonderfully written poem and a very interesting subject. In a recent poem, I was inspired by the statement. When we look into the universe, we see it like an amoeba gazing at the sea.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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There are many worlds we exist in. I hope I'm better looking in my others. What a wonderfully written poem and a very interesting subject. In a recent poem, I was inspired by the statement. When we look into the universe, we see it like an amoeba gazing at the sea.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for the review. I am pleased you enjoyed the piece. Best wishes to you!
God bless,
Opal Rose
Comment from humpwhistle
A fine sentiment, Opal, and I hope something like this might be possible . . . but I have my doubts. For instance, 'under God' is controversial enough here on Earth. Imagine multiplying that controversy over a multiverse.
Still, I like the sentiment.
Peace, Lee
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reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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A fine sentiment, Opal, and I hope something like this might be possible . . . but I have my doubts. For instance, 'under God' is controversial enough here on Earth. Imagine multiplying that controversy over a multiverse.
Still, I like the sentiment.
Peace, Lee
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for the review. I am pleased you enjoyed the piece. Best wishes to you!
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
