The Edge of Convenience
multiverse unity165 total reviews
Comment from smileycloud
what a good free verse form
a powerful strong message and good flow in the wording
totally understandable when reading it
good work
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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what a good free verse form
a powerful strong message and good flow in the wording
totally understandable when reading it
good work
have a smiley day
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for the review! I am pleased you enjoyed the piece. Best wishes to you.
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from cupa tea
I had to read that three times to digest it. Which isn't bad at all. Just saying you really did some thinking when you wrote it. Nicely done and I live the image you placed with it...
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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I had to read that three times to digest it. Which isn't bad at all. Just saying you really did some thinking when you wrote it. Nicely done and I live the image you placed with it...
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for the review. I am pleased you enjoyed the piece. Best wishes to you!
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from Willie P. Smith
First of all, Opal, I want to individually welcome you to the Fanstory
family. They are a great bunch of talented people. Your play on the
Pledge of Allegence is very original and interesting.
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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First of all, Opal, I want to individually welcome you to the Fanstory
family. They are a great bunch of talented people. Your play on the
Pledge of Allegence is very original and interesting.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you for the warm welcome and thank you kindly for the review. I am pleased you enjoyed the piece. Best wishes to you!
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from Raul1
This is exceptional. I have enjoyed reading this poem. I like how you structured your poem. Excellent work! No mistakes. Good luck in the contest! Nice work.
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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This is exceptional. I have enjoyed reading this poem. I like how you structured your poem. Excellent work! No mistakes. Good luck in the contest! Nice work.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for the review. I am pleased you enjoyed the piece. Best wishes to you!
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This was super cool to me since I'm a sci fi nerd. I can picture this kind of pledge way in the future. I really liked t and thought it was extremely creative. I think the title doesn't fit the poem, though.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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This was super cool to me since I'm a sci fi nerd. I can picture this kind of pledge way in the future. I really liked t and thought it was extremely creative. I think the title doesn't fit the poem, though.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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I am happy you enjoyed The Edge of Convenience. Thank you kindly for your feedback. It was important to me that the title rhymed. Could we be living on the verge of such a convenience; one in which all existence easily (conveniently) lives in harmony within the perimeter (edge) of the multiverse? The title is a rhyming, complex addition to the poems content.
Best of luck in all your writing endeavors.
Sincerely signed,
Opal Rose
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Edge of Convenience
by Opal Rose
Hello, Opal,
A very interesting poem entry for the
Free Verse Poetry Contest. Beautiful presentation. Thank you very much for the information in your author notes. You have some symbols where quotation marks were. Good job.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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The Edge of Convenience
by Opal Rose
Hello, Opal,
A very interesting poem entry for the
Free Verse Poetry Contest. Beautiful presentation. Thank you very much for the information in your author notes. You have some symbols where quotation marks were. Good job.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Hello Gypsy,
Thank you for the kind words and positive review.
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Wouldn't that be wonderful? Then, one wonders would it ever be achievable? Who knows? The different nuances in various cultures around the world are quite difficult to overcome. There are such wide gaps.
Yet, your poem renders the possibility of a future Eden.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Wouldn't that be wonderful? Then, one wonders would it ever be achievable? Who knows? The different nuances in various cultures around the world are quite difficult to overcome. There are such wide gaps.
Yet, your poem renders the possibility of a future Eden.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Yes. Wonderful it truly would be to live in such an existence. Thank you for your feedback.
Best wishes,
Opal Rose
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about the edge of convenience when we cannot go anywhere, we can make sure we are comfortable where we need to stay when we cannot be free, we can just as well insist on convenience.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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A very well-written free verse poem about the edge of convenience when we cannot go anywhere, we can make sure we are comfortable where we need to stay when we cannot be free, we can just as well insist on convenience.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review. Best wishes in all your writing endeavors.
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
This is a beautiful entry for the free verse contest and you have chosen the perfect picture to go with it. Pledging allegiance to the galaxy is a lovely idea, and it was wonderful to see the words "under God." Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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This is a beautiful entry for the free verse contest and you have chosen the perfect picture to go with it. Pledging allegiance to the galaxy is a lovely idea, and it was wonderful to see the words "under God." Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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I am happy you enjoyed it and appreciate my leaving under God within. Thank you kindly for your review.
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from Vanny
I admired your poem. It is so beautiful and I definitely can feel that when your wrote this poem you really written it with all your emotions . We all wish that our world that we live in today can be a peaceful place full of love and harmony. My friend we can't change the world but we can only change our selves and our flaws. Thank you for sharing .
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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I admired your poem. It is so beautiful and I definitely can feel that when your wrote this poem you really written it with all your emotions . We all wish that our world that we live in today can be a peaceful place full of love and harmony. My friend we can't change the world but we can only change our selves and our flaws. Thank you for sharing .
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you so much for your adoration of this free verse and thank you for such a wonderful review. I too wish to live in such a harmonious utopia. It is true we possess a powerful ability to change ourselves. Best of luck in all of your writing endeavors.
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
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