The Edge of Convenience
multiverse unity165 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I think we want unity in our country. To compromise with everybody is going to be a very difficult task for our president; because we don't always agree with each other. But I have faith in him. God created us to have our own mentality (brain); which is sacred and should never be abused and misused.
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I think we want unity in our country. To compromise with everybody is going to be a very difficult task for our president; because we don't always agree with each other. But I have faith in him. God created us to have our own mentality (brain); which is sacred and should never be abused and misused.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
Comment from Julie Sandy
Beautiful poem and imagery I really like the message in the poem, its a more modern version of the Pledge.
Good luck in the competition
Thank you for sharing
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Beautiful poem and imagery I really like the message in the poem, its a more modern version of the Pledge.
Good luck in the competition
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like your boldness about our world and universe and even multiverse. We are having a hard time to unit one country like the US. Let alone to unity the world or the universe. Multiverse is just of many theories about our universe. The other one is the String Theory. I thought the multiverse theory means that we have many parallel universe and you exist in each but with a different fate. So you only want one for yourself. The individual governments are weaker and technology are gaining power. Eventually the government will be useless and then it will be a government to rule the whole universe just like in Star Wars. I think.
Very interesting.
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I like your boldness about our world and universe and even multiverse. We are having a hard time to unit one country like the US. Let alone to unity the world or the universe. Multiverse is just of many theories about our universe. The other one is the String Theory. I thought the multiverse theory means that we have many parallel universe and you exist in each but with a different fate. So you only want one for yourself. The individual governments are weaker and technology are gaining power. Eventually the government will be useless and then it will be a government to rule the whole universe just like in Star Wars. I think.
Very interesting.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020
Comment from L. Kalere
This is a beautiful commentary on the fact that we are all one species, all human regardless of anything else. You have a wonderful ability to rise above and see the true overall picture...and are able to verbalize it so eloquently. Love it!
Linda
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This is a beautiful commentary on the fact that we are all one species, all human regardless of anything else. You have a wonderful ability to rise above and see the true overall picture...and are able to verbalize it so eloquently. Love it!
Linda
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020
Comment from Wendy G
Thank you for this well thought through, and well-expressed poem. You have written of what we all desire - a world of peace, harmony, and acceptance of difference. One day, hopefully soon.
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Thank you for this well thought through, and well-expressed poem. You have written of what we all desire - a world of peace, harmony, and acceptance of difference. One day, hopefully soon.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Opal, words from the heart never go astray when heard buy a reader, so even though your Authors Notes very carefully explain your intent, I hardly think they are necessary, (unless you were wary of a cynical reviewer.)
But I respond as an innocent, to a lovely hope, expressed in such noble words.
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Dear Opal, words from the heart never go astray when heard buy a reader, so even though your Authors Notes very carefully explain your intent, I hardly think they are necessary, (unless you were wary of a cynical reviewer.)
But I respond as an innocent, to a lovely hope, expressed in such noble words.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
Comment from poetwatch
Thank you, Opal Rose, for clearing that last word for me. :) For a minute there I thought that freedom would be short-lived being neutralized. :) I agree with your words if we can be one with the universe where everyone is equal. I am happy you know we are not alone. This is a good entry for the Free Verse Poetry Contest.
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Thank you, Opal Rose, for clearing that last word for me. :) For a minute there I thought that freedom would be short-lived being neutralized. :) I agree with your words if we can be one with the universe where everyone is equal. I am happy you know we are not alone. This is a good entry for the Free Verse Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I had to brush up on my limited knowledge of English and vocabulary. I like the idea of Multi Universe and idealism at its core of existence. Very well written. Good luck in the contest!
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I had to brush up on my limited knowledge of English and vocabulary. I like the idea of Multi Universe and idealism at its core of existence. Very well written. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
Comment from Rx kingpen
Got to up my vocabulary. I think I'm slipping. Your selection, though, reads naturally and unpretentious.
The content is amazing. Was up at 3 mulling stuff like this over. The possibility is endless. I just want to be One.
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Got to up my vocabulary. I think I'm slipping. Your selection, though, reads naturally and unpretentious.
The content is amazing. Was up at 3 mulling stuff like this over. The possibility is endless. I just want to be One.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very good. A universal pledge for all beings, inspired. A beautiful message for all of us. Technically sound and the art work, it's just breath taking. Great job, wishing you continued success.
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Very good. A universal pledge for all beings, inspired. A beautiful message for all of us. Technically sound and the art work, it's just breath taking. Great job, wishing you continued success.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
