Let's
Marriage Anniversary.55 total reviews
Comment from Kathleen S.
A beautiful poem that is not only creative, but it's what every wife wants to hear from her husband. Full of love and admiration for the one that fills your life with joy is something that is a life long pursuit for many. Great job in convening that to your reader.
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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A beautiful poem that is not only creative, but it's what every wife wants to hear from her husband. Full of love and admiration for the one that fills your life with joy is something that is a life long pursuit for many. Great job in convening that to your reader.
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you, Kathleen for the very nice review and bright six stars.
Comment from Patty Palmer
A beautiful tribute to your late wife. The words are caring and loving. The rhyme and rhythm is wonderful. Good luck with the contest!
God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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A beautiful tribute to your late wife. The words are caring and loving. The rhyme and rhythm is wonderful. Good luck with the contest!
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you, Patty, for your very nice comments and stars.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Let's", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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"Let's", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you, Duchess, for the nice review and stars. Wow! six shiny ones.
Comment from Raul1
This is a very romantic poem. I think that this poem is well written. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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This is a very romantic poem. I think that this poem is well written. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you, Raul, for the review and stars
Comment from ameen786
A wonderful entry for the contest; simple down to earth vocabulary with meaningful verses and superbly rhymed; thanks for sharing, happy anniversary; good luck!
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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A wonderful entry for the contest; simple down to earth vocabulary with meaningful verses and superbly rhymed; thanks for sharing, happy anniversary; good luck!
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you, Ameen, for the nice review and stars.
Comment from richie b
Willie,
Beautiful poem for a beautiful lady. Your feelings
are alive in your words. Your wife had to be pleased
that you bared your heart to her.
Over the years of along marriage, we can become
complacent with each other. Life becomes routine.
Your poem reveals she remains your special bride.
Best wishes in contest.
Peace,
Richie b
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Willie,
Beautiful poem for a beautiful lady. Your feelings
are alive in your words. Your wife had to be pleased
that you bared your heart to her.
Over the years of along marriage, we can become
complacent with each other. Life becomes routine.
Your poem reveals she remains your special bride.
Best wishes in contest.
Peace,
Richie b
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thank you, Richie, for your wonderful review and stars. I was very blessed.
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You are most welcome!
Comment from January L'Angelle
This made me sad and joyful at the same time. Reading your authors notes was heart wrenching. I'm so sorry for your loss. The poem is gorgeous, she would have loved it. I certainly did. Great poem! -January L.
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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This made me sad and joyful at the same time. Reading your authors notes was heart wrenching. I'm so sorry for your loss. The poem is gorgeous, she would have loved it. I certainly did. Great poem! -January L.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thank you, January, for the very nice review and stars.
Comment from R.Peyregne
This made me smile. I could just see an older couple celebrating their 50th anniversary, dancing to their favorite Elvis song, and holding hands while they walked along the beach at sunset. Beautiful reader vision. Thank you very much for your words.
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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This made me smile. I could just see an older couple celebrating their 50th anniversary, dancing to their favorite Elvis song, and holding hands while they walked along the beach at sunset. Beautiful reader vision. Thank you very much for your words.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thank you for the nice review and stars .
Comment from Kenneth Gagne
I like the overall rhythm of the poem, although it's disrupted ever so slightly by the comma after "the fire we lit." I think the choice to have the second and fourth lines of each stanza rhyme is an interesting one, since the first and third are the ones that do in similarly structured poems I've come across. Taking your notes into consideration, each event seems to exist simultaneously as something that happened, something that will happen, and something that is still happening (albeit in your memory), which is less confusing conceptually here than it might be in other contexts and in other forms. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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I like the overall rhythm of the poem, although it's disrupted ever so slightly by the comma after "the fire we lit." I think the choice to have the second and fourth lines of each stanza rhyme is an interesting one, since the first and third are the ones that do in similarly structured poems I've come across. Taking your notes into consideration, each event seems to exist simultaneously as something that happened, something that will happen, and something that is still happening (albeit in your memory), which is less confusing conceptually here than it might be in other contexts and in other forms. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thank you, Ken, for the constructive review and stars. I removed the comma.
Comment from Puzzle
Woo HOO willie!!!!!! Your wife is one LUUUUCKY girl. I absofruitly love this poem! I love that it's about a married couple. I love that you want to kee things new and exciting. I love that you wrote this for her. I wish I could yell "men, take note!" Hahah. Great job!!!!
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Woo HOO willie!!!!!! Your wife is one LUUUUCKY girl. I absofruitly love this poem! I love that it's about a married couple. I love that you want to kee things new and exciting. I love that you wrote this for her. I wish I could yell "men, take note!" Hahah. Great job!!!!
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thank you, for the wonderful review and stars. I was the lucky one.
