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Let's

Marriage Anniversary.

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Marriage Anniversary.
Let's
by Willie P. Smith

Hello, Willie,

I never had a love like yours. Maybe in another life. I think your poem is beautiful. I particularly like this stanza....

Let's make love all night long
and start again when we're through.....

Well done my friend. Your wife would be proud.

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    You made my day. Wow! six beautiful stars.
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
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This is a lovely Anniversary wish for your wife. I read in the notes that you and your wife enjoyed many wonderful anniversaries before she passed.
I'm sure when this date rolls around that you miss her more than ever. You obviously had a very special love commemorated by your words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Our love for each other was never questioned by neither of us. Losing her was the hardest loss I will ever face. Thank you Louise,
    for the wonderful review and stars.
Comment from Susan Larson
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How absolutely beautiful! I am so sorry to hear that you lost your wife in the physical sense, but that your love for her lives on forever. I love that you still count the years that you HAVE been married. A six if I still had one.

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you, Susan, for the very nice review and stars.
Comment from June Sargent
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What a lovely tribute to your enduring love for the wife of your youth. All those wonderful years you spent together surely bonded you forever. Thank you for sharing your beautiful sentiments.

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you, June for the nice review and stats.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Such a wonderful poem, Willie!! ;) I just know your wife was thrilled and I'm thoroughly impressed with not only your romantic streak but also for going all night after so many years of marriage (wink, wink). :) :) You can tell your heart was in your pen here, and I am so glad you shared that piece of your heart with us!! ;) :) Beautiful offering for the contest, sir, and best of luck in the contest!! ;) :)
P.S. Seems your poem has posted as a prose offering, Willie - be sure to message Tom and have him 'flip it' to a poem for you. :) ;)

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you, Yvette, for the wink, wink review and stars.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image, Willie.
-Thanks for sharing the
notes and poem.
-I am sure your wife would
appreciate it very much.
-A very nice tribute and
anniversary poem celebrating 45
year together.
-Good luck in the contest.



 Comment Written 20-May-2020


reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you, Pam, for the very nice review and stars.
reply by Pam (respa) on 22-May-2020
    You are very welcome, Willie. I saw your poem got moved, and it looked great. When you post something, check how it is listed. You can change it yourself as long as it is in preview mode.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Wow, naughty, naughty, love is beautiful no matter how old the relationship. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.

 Comment Written 20-May-2020


reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you, Iza for the very nice / funny review and stars.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Good job, Willie. Just between you and me I feel the same way about my deceased husband. We would have been married 65 years as well. On Oct.2 it would have been 66. He passed in 2009. I still miss him so. Well done my friend. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 20-May-2020


reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you, Nancy, for the very nice review and stars,
Comment from Louise Michelle
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What a lovely tribute to your wife. I firmly believe that the spirits of our deceased loved ones come to visit us from time to time. If you suddenly think of your wife for no apparent reason, she just might be tapping you on your shoulder and smiling. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 20-May-2020


reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    I agree, Louise. I believe my wife has visited me many times. Thank
    you for the review and stars.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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How lovely! This deserves six stars which I do not have. Oh, to be loved like this...This is the dream of every woman, and to have a man who can write out his feelings!

I am so sorry for your loss. Put your memories on paper so other young men will know the right way to love.

 Comment Written 20-May-2020


reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you, Rebecca, I always look forward to your reviews.
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 22-May-2020
    You're always welcome.