Let's
Marriage Anniversary.55 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Bednar
I think it is "Just you and me, my dear" Me is grammatically correct and it repeats the "m" and rhymes with "we". (but I could be wrong)
A very sweet and romantic poem. I don't think this is for a children's book :)
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I think it is "Just you and me, my dear" Me is grammatically correct and it repeats the "m" and rhymes with "we". (but I could be wrong)
A very sweet and romantic poem. I don't think this is for a children's book :)
Comment Written 21-May-2020
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Your grammar is correct. I made your corrected change. Thanks for
your review and stars.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hi Willie,
I pray you are welcome during this pandemic. This is such a sweet loving heartfelt poem of someone deeply in love with his wife. It's a beautiful tribute to your wife. Praise God for your sixty five years of marriage, and writing this poem on your forty-fifth anniversary. I love you kept your marriage fresh, and continue to let sparkles ignite. You can tell your marriage was highly blessed with a wonderful woman who brought you so much Joy and Fun. She touched you heart for many years. This was such an enjoyable love letter to read. Well-done, Willie. Happy Anniversary. Stay safe.
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Hi Willie,
I pray you are welcome during this pandemic. This is such a sweet loving heartfelt poem of someone deeply in love with his wife. It's a beautiful tribute to your wife. Praise God for your sixty five years of marriage, and writing this poem on your forty-fifth anniversary. I love you kept your marriage fresh, and continue to let sparkles ignite. You can tell your marriage was highly blessed with a wonderful woman who brought you so much Joy and Fun. She touched you heart for many years. This was such an enjoyable love letter to read. Well-done, Willie. Happy Anniversary. Stay safe.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
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Thank you, Joyce, for the extremely wonderful review and stars. I was blessed when we met.
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You are so welcome.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Lovely tribute poem to your late wife, although written, of course, during your time together.
I like the strong title word 'Let's' and its repeated use in the poem itself as you explore some of the things you and your love liked doing. Strong rhyme and mostly regular meter keep the poem flowing well.
Steve
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Lovely tribute poem to your late wife, although written, of course, during your time together.
I like the strong title word 'Let's' and its repeated use in the poem itself as you explore some of the things you and your love liked doing. Strong rhyme and mostly regular meter keep the poem flowing well.
Steve
Comment Written 21-May-2020
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Thank you, Steve, for the nice review and stars.
Comment from amada
I think that this is a wonderful poem celebrating an eternal love. Just imagine, after 45 years and still to be so deeply in love. I know your dearlty beloved wife is smiling from up there. Lovely...
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I think that this is a wonderful poem celebrating an eternal love. Just imagine, after 45 years and still to be so deeply in love. I know your dearlty beloved wife is smiling from up there. Lovely...
Comment Written 21-May-2020
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Thank you, Amanda, for the very nice review and stars.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a sweetly romantic and deeply meaningful poem. It conveys a powerful message about enduring love. The notes make the poem seem
even more lovely.
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This is a sweetly romantic and deeply meaningful poem. It conveys a powerful message about enduring love. The notes make the poem seem
even more lovely.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Janice, for your very nice review and stars.
Comment from Jacob David Collins
This is a heart-warming poem. Anniversaries are a special way of looking back at the past and thinking again to the future. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
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This is a heart-warming poem. Anniversaries are a special way of looking back at the past and thinking again to the future. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-May-2020
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Thank you, Jacob, for the very nice review and stars.
Comment from royowen
This is a nice lusty poem you've written here Willie, matching the book of Song of Songs. A beautifully written work my friend, there is a great life and a great love for your dear wife in this literary anniversary gift, congratulations to you both. Blessings Roy
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This is a nice lusty poem you've written here Willie, matching the book of Song of Songs. A beautifully written work my friend, there is a great life and a great love for your dear wife in this literary anniversary gift, congratulations to you both. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-May-2020
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Thank you, as usual Roy, glad you liked the poem. Thanks for the stars.
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Goog Job Willie
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem and anniversary wishes for your deceased wife, it is always hard to forget the wonderful days couples had together especially on days that were celelbrated.
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A very well-written poem and anniversary wishes for your deceased wife, it is always hard to forget the wonderful days couples had together especially on days that were celelbrated.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
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Thank you, Sandra,for your heartfelt review and stars.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This is a really sweet poem about getting back the love that you lost, so nicely done. I think you have done well, and it was nice to read this poem. I smiled as I read it.
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This is a really sweet poem about getting back the love that you lost, so nicely done. I think you have done well, and it was nice to read this poem. I smiled as I read it.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
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Thank you, Amanda, for your warm review and stars.
Comment from Sally Law
What a relief to find something good at the top of the fan story poetry selection. This is the best one at the top right now, I'd say and so very sweet. My husband and I will be married 45 years this December. I'm so sorry for your loss but it's obviously a wonderful love from which you will never recover.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
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What a relief to find something good at the top of the fan story poetry selection. This is the best one at the top right now, I'd say and so very sweet. My husband and I will be married 45 years this December. I'm so sorry for your loss but it's obviously a wonderful love from which you will never recover.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thanks, Sally, for your very kind words and stars.
