Love Notes from the Heart
A Naani entry9 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your naani is in good form, June. I love the sincerity of it. Your words flow smoothly with a great message of love. Great image, too. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Your naani is in good form, June. I love the sincerity of it. Your words flow smoothly with a great message of love. Great image, too. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Beautiful entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt contest. I like this type of poem. You did a good job with the naani form. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Hello my friend
Beautiful entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt contest. I like this type of poem. You did a good job with the naani form. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Love notes are absolutely precious when given to a man or woman from the other one. They can be read over and over, kept, and bring back pleasant memories.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Love notes are absolutely precious when given to a man or woman from the other one. They can be read over and over, kept, and bring back pleasant memories.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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So glad this piece resonated with you!
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Thank you for writing it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Naani about the special language between lovers that are always clear to each other. The ones around them do not always understand their notes but they do exactly what it means.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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A very well-written Naani about the special language between lovers that are always clear to each other. The ones around them do not always understand their notes but they do exactly what it means.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from papa55mike
What a wonderfully written poem and I like how the rosebud touches the heart of Heaven. I've read several of these entries today and I like this one.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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What a wonderfully written poem and I like how the rosebud touches the heart of Heaven. I've read several of these entries today and I like this one.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from zanya
Yes such lovely intimate sentiments of appreciation for love experienced in life 'from your heart to mine'-beautiful metaphor 'love notes streaming '- thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Yes such lovely intimate sentiments of appreciation for love experienced in life 'from your heart to mine'-beautiful metaphor 'love notes streaming '- thanks for sharing
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from oliver818
This is a beautiful poem, I enjoyed. I love the image of love as musical notes. It Flows well and has a nice feel to it. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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This is a beautiful poem, I enjoyed. I love the image of love as musical notes. It Flows well and has a nice feel to it. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I liked the meaning of this poem. I think you did well. Not sure the first line of a naani is usually that long, but I won't call myself an expert either.
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I liked the meaning of this poem. I think you did well. Not sure the first line of a naani is usually that long, but I won't call myself an expert either.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
WOW, buildings has the same treatment like clothes and humans :"Left behind like an abandoned building
with a hole in her heart
Restored by new owner's
loving touch"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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WOW, buildings has the same treatment like clothes and humans :"Left behind like an abandoned building
with a hole in her heart
Restored by new owner's
loving touch"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece!
