When She Returned
A lover who left and came back to him.4 total reviews
Comment from playinaround
sodden rain? do you mean sudden. Im not sure. this is beautifully presented with the perfect picture for the words. It sounds like pure joy and elation to see her again... well done!
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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sodden rain? do you mean sudden. Im not sure. this is beautifully presented with the perfect picture for the words. It sounds like pure joy and elation to see her again... well done!
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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No, I was using sodden in a figurative sense -- meaning filled with sadness. Thanks for your read and review.
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Oh, im so sorry. I should have looked it up.
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Oh, im so sorry. I should have looked it up.
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No reason to be sorry. Thanks for the read.
Comment from zanya
How well expressed with candour and frankness- no fuss - no frills - just a quiet expression of joy at the return of the 'other'- just like in real everyday life !
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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How well expressed with candour and frankness- no fuss - no frills - just a quiet expression of joy at the return of the 'other'- just like in real everyday life !
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you for your read and comments
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is quite beautiful. I like the upside down rainbow that looks like a smile. This poem is really pretty and romantic. It tells a wonderful story of love. The words that you chose were great! Well penned. -January L.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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This is quite beautiful. I like the upside down rainbow that looks like a smile. This poem is really pretty and romantic. It tells a wonderful story of love. The words that you chose were great! Well penned. -January L.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you for your review and your kind comments.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great job with this poem written for the contest. I like the image that you presented well in your writing, and you matched it with the perfect picture. Good luck and keep writing.
Bill
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Great job with this poem written for the contest. I like the image that you presented well in your writing, and you matched it with the perfect picture. Good luck and keep writing.
Bill
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you for your read and review.
