"Written with All My Heart"
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Rose of My Heart (A)"Heartfelt Poetry
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Comment from Lulube
A two parter that takes your breath away with the attraction and love only to be broken and left with sorrow, as you said, yes again. I think the ones that are risk takers, adventuresome, alive in their youth have the hardest time with love. The geeks, book keepers, house keepers etc. seem to all be happy in love. go figure
lulube
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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A two parter that takes your breath away with the attraction and love only to be broken and left with sorrow, as you said, yes again. I think the ones that are risk takers, adventuresome, alive in their youth have the hardest time with love. The geeks, book keepers, house keepers etc. seem to all be happy in love. go figure
lulube
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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I got a rescue adventure into beautiful women half my age at over $400 I hope I win one of them?
Wish me luck I want Rose!
Ricky
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lol good luck hope she doesn't have hidden thorns, good to see your excitement though. something to be said for being younger
lulube
lulube
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
OOOOOH Ricky i have to give you a 6 just so you know i'm out of sixes but i love the wording was so beautiful I loved so much i had to read it twice
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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OOOOOH Ricky i have to give you a 6 just so you know i'm out of sixes but i love the wording was so beautiful I loved so much i had to read it twice
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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That's okay baby I know you ran out we get new ones every Sunday!
Ricky
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thanks ricky my friend
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a bittersweet poem. It starts out with a romantic connotation, which later turns spiritual due to a broken heart. I love the picture you chose to go with it.
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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This is a bittersweet poem. It starts out with a romantic connotation, which later turns spiritual due to a broken heart. I love the picture you chose to go with it.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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I thanks my dear poet I'm happy to please.
Doctor Ricky 1024Why thanks!
Almost got Six *s!
Tee, Hee, Tee!
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I don't understand what the part in the middle is for when you say your name again and talk about the copyright, but either way, this has a lot of love and feeling in it, so good job with that.
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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I don't understand what the part in the middle is for when you say your name again and talk about the copyright, but either way, this has a lot of love and feeling in it, so good job with that.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thanks Amanda one day I will get six stars out of you!
Ricky
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Sometimes 6 stars isn't an option in my box where I select them. It is sometimes, and then other times, it only goes up to five. Any idea why that might be?
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Yes.
The higher your rank the morr you get every Sunday
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So as my rank gets higher, I will get more 6 star options to give people? Thanks for explaining that.
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I get I think six.
I never counted them to see how many in a week but I do know they are renewed every Sunday at midnight.
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