Comment from zanya

Excellent

a 5-7-5 that whispers almost to the reader the importance of moving forward on our earthly journey rather than looking back at what might have been=thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 17-May-2020

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reply by the author on 17-May-2020

Thanks for your review - I liked my old life, but there's no point living in the past.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Your point is well put, and well taken. Looking in the rear view informs, or should inform, the way we move forward. Very nice presentation, wise sentiment.
Best of luck at the polls.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 17-May-2020

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reply by the author on 17-May-2020

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from ESOSTINE

Good

I love the theme of your work. While one may look back in time to smile even over our regrets and sorrows, one should not dwell there but must remember that the future is brighter and must move on to enjoy it.

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 Comment Written 17-May-2020

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reply by the author on 17-May-2020

Thanks for your positive comments about my poem. Onward and upward!

Comment from RodG

Excellent

This is very good advice for these stressful times. It is easier for many to think of the past and ignore the future. Rod

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 Comment Written 17-May-2020

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reply by the author on 17-May-2020

I liked my old life and want it back, but that will never happen, so I might as well hope the future has something good in it.
Thanks for reviewing.