Comment from Y. M. Roger

Good

Had never heard of the Emerald Tablets before - a cool choice for your focus! ;) ;) For an acrostic, however, you should align your text in a vertical alignment on the left... I would suggest 'bold' and, perhaps, 'one size larger' on your first letter of each line to make the 'acrostic' much more obvious to the reader. ;) :) Liked the monorhyme of the first stanza there!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)

Remnantsof a legends fade --> Remnants of legends fade

his reviews outcome --> his review's outcome

Philosopher's, paper's of Sir --> philosophers, papers of Sir

 Comment Written 15-May-2020

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reply by the author on 15-May-2020

Thank you for the Review and Advice, I definitely Appreciate it, be making the corrections shortly.
Blessings.

Comment from Amanda Louise Davis

Good

I liked this poem for its clever subject matter, but I did notice a few errors in it. I would be willing to help. The second line is missing a space, and it also doesn't make sense. Try maybe.

remnants of a great legend's fade

It needs the apostrophe.

 Comment Written 15-May-2020

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reply by the author on 15-May-2020

Thank you for the Review and Advice, I'll be making corrections shortly. Blessings to you for your Help.

reply by Amanda Louise Davis on 15-May-2020

Always happy to.