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In The Folds Of Ol' Glory!

Another Commando Dies Today!

19 total reviews 
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Exceptional
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I hope you know how special you are and what a hero you are to many of us. I think all of us take everything that is sacrificed for our freedoms for granted. We wouldn't be where we are today if we didn't have brave people going out there and fighting for us. I hope you were able to process everything you have been through somehow. That's another thing we often never think of. There is always the stuff that comes home and has to be dealt with.

 Comment Written 23-May-2020


reply by the author on 23-May-2020
    A "SALUTE," my dear friend! The real heroes came back in a box, and were shipped to God. Thanks for the "Exceptional Review," kind words and taking time to read my work. Best wishes for an awesome Memorial Day and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Anonymous.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I remember January 16, 1991, extremely well. I was at home with my three young sons, my fourth wasn't born yet. I was fielding calls from young military spouses who were scared because our husbands were over there. Because of my husband's rank I got the job of calming these young girls, and I do mean girls, down. My boys were watching the war unfold on TV. Once, I had a break from the phone, I turned off the TV. Good luck with the contest, it seems I read a similar story about a Viet Nam battle.

 Comment Written 23-May-2020


reply by the author on 23-May-2020
    A "SALUTE," for you, Barbara . . . and a "SALUTE," for your husband! Thanks for the excellent review, kind words and taking time to read my work. Best wishes for an awesome Memorial Day and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Anonymous.
Comment from dmt1967
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'"In your professional opinion, Doctor Miller, is John mentally alert and qualified for the "Joint Services Commando (Ttaining)?"' Did you mean (training) Great story and good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.

 Comment Written 22-May-2020


reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    A "SALUTE," my friend! Thanks for the "Exceptional" review, kind words and taking time to read my work. Best wishes for an awesome Memorial Day and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Anonymous.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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You are the best writer on war whose work I have read. This post is an example of your quality of writing as well as your knowledge of the military. You write with your heart. Reading your work brings out strong emotions in the reader.

 Comment Written 22-May-2020


reply by the author on 23-May-2020
    A "SALUTE," Rebecca! Thanks for the review, kind words and taking time to read my work. Best wishes for an awesome Memorial Day and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Anonymous.
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 23-May-2020
    Thank you for writing your patriotic posts reminding us all of the greatest country in the world, and all the men and women who have served, even to the point of death, for her.

    Have you ever thought of running for public office?
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
    Greetings, my dear friend!
    It's gonna take an 18-wheeler to carry all of your kind words. Best wishes for a happy "Memorial Day and God Bless." Anonymous.
Comment from R.Peyregne
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If this truly is a true story, thank you for your service. I enjoyed the visual and journey. I am a prior military (Active Army), so I understood everything as well.. lol. My only criticism would be that your change in tense makes it a little hard to follow at times (First person to second person, back to first-person, etc..); all in all wonderful piece of work; thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 23-May-2020
    A "SALUTE," R. Peyregne! Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. "A true story, my friend!" Best wishes for an awesome Memorial Day and God Bless. Anonymous.
Comment from damommy
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Your story is exciting in many ways. I like the banter between John and the doctor and later that of the commandos on the helicopter. The scenes are all well-thought out in description. As I am from a military family, I can identify with the feelings of all involved.

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    A "SALUTE," my dear friend! Great hearing from you again. Thanks for the excellent review, kind words and taking time to read my work. Best wishes for an "Awesome Memorial Day" and God Bless. Respectfully, Anonymous.
Comment from RPSaxena
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Hello Bill,
Interesting piece of War and History Non-Fiction having captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely flashes of thrills, romance, and humor which make the story just like a wholesome food.
"...No, John; yet, I must have lost my mind when I accepted the assignment to fly you boy scouts into battle."
In the face of Death to have a sense of humor is feasible only for like you commandos!
Superb!
[ 5 Stars + You yourself are the Sparkling Star. ]
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Hello, RP!
    Look . . . a "DOUBLE SALUTE!" Quite an "AWESOME REVIEW," my dear friend. Thanks for the kind words and taking time to read my work. It is an honor having a "Magnificent Writer" (YOU) to express admiration for my work. Best wishes for an "Incredible Memorial Day," and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Anonymous.
reply by RPSaxena on 23-May-2020
    Bill, Most Welcome!
    &
    Thanks for so LOVELY words, the Best Wishes & Blessings.
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
    RP,
    Happy "Memorial Day." Look . . . a "SALUTE!"
    Anonymous..
reply by RPSaxena on 25-May-2020
    Hi Friend, The same to you!
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from Tootie
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What an AWESOME story, Mystery Writer! This was so captivating; I felt like I was right there on the battlefield with you. You made me laugh and you made me cry! Why does the good guy always have to die? You are a HERO, and I think your writing and storytelling skills are truly FANTASTIC. It is an HONOR to read your works. I can foresee a bestseller coming from your AMAZING writing soon! Oh YES! Wishing you all the best. Keep on sharing your stories 'cause we all love to read 'em! God Bless.
Respectfully with Bunches of Love and Admiration,
Cathy

 Comment Written 20-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    An "ASTONISHING REVIEW!" A Seven Star (plus) worthy--you betcha! "Did you know that God hesitated on sending you down to write books?" Well, He certainly did. Why? Because you were His most Beautiful Angel. However, He saw Cecile climbing the golden stairway then whispered, "It's one Beautiful Angel for another!" FYI, "You are HERO # 1 . . . and don't you forget it. Now, why does the good guy always have to die? Well, I asked God and He replied, "Because he was out to catch the world record fish and knew it would break you're heart if he did." Are you believing this? I didn't think you were. A "bestseller!" It's just a heartbeat away. So, go get it! Best wishes for an "Awesome Memorial Day," and God Bless. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Anonymous.
Comment from richie b
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I say this as a compliment, your story has the flavor
of Sgt. Nick Fury and his Howling Commando's. To this
day they are my all- time Marvel hero's.
Your true story salutes your brother Mark in his
unselfish giving of life. Your story is action packed
but that is what live combat is about.
Thank for serving and sharing your story.
Peace,
Richie b

 Comment Written 20-May-2020


reply by the author on 20-May-2020
    In return for the "compliment". . . I say, a "SALUTE," Richie! Great hearing from you, my dear friend. Thanks for the excellent review, kind words and taking time to read my work. Best wishes for an awesome Memorial Day, and that God shall bless you and you're family. Respectfully with Admiration, Anonymous.
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
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I WISH I had six stars for this amazing story. First I must say thank you for your service. Thank you for taking the reader on this journey with you. I held my breath at some lines, cried at others. I don't even understand how someone could be so brave and I wish I could do more for those who served and those who continue to. My father served in WWII and my son in Operation Desert Storm. We are a family of patriots ever grateful to all who put their lives on the line.

 Comment Written 20-May-2020


reply by the author on 20-May-2020
    Greetings, Louise! Three "SALUTES." One for your father, one for your son, for having served under the shadow of Ol' Glory. The third "SALUTE" is for you're review, kind words and taking time to read my work. Best wishes for a happy Memorial Day and God bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Anonymous.