Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Wow! An acrostic and a loop! This is a clever write and not an easy task to combine both forms, but you nailed it here and secured a strong relationship within, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-May-2020

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reply by the author on 14-May-2020

Thank you for these wonderful comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You always do this amazing looping Plus the acrostic! Shouldn't this be in the contest? As always, I appreciate your thoughtful counsel on what makes a relationship healthy and strong by being supportive and honest and united in one heart and path.

 Comment Written 14-May-2020

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reply by the author on 14-May-2020

Thank you very much, yes I like this challenge for myself, I am glad this one came off, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This is quite the clever poem with an acrostic of a harder-than-usual theme of relationships. Favorite line has got to be: Honor and praise for both to indulge
mainly because that helps describe why a relationship with any other person could be desirable and sought after. Nice share.

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 Comment Written 14-May-2020

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reply by the author on 14-May-2020

Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot