Our Lord
Our Lord described.3 total reviews
Comment from Lucy de Welles
Has all the elements. Picture matches well with text. Centered text looks nice. Would only use the word "proof" once.
Thank you for the opportunity to review your work
Well done!
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Has all the elements. Picture matches well with text. Centered text looks nice. Would only use the word "proof" once.
Thank you for the opportunity to review your work
Well done!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you, for your review.
Comment from tfawcus
Your poem follows the prescribed scheme of rhymed couplets and also has rhythmic appeal. It seems that we are all safe, just so long as the dear Lord keeps orbiting the earth and looking down on the folly of mankind.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Your poem follows the prescribed scheme of rhymed couplets and also has rhythmic appeal. It seems that we are all safe, just so long as the dear Lord keeps orbiting the earth and looking down on the folly of mankind.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you,for your nice review and stars. I think the Lord has just about had enough.
Comment from poetwatch
You proved that the Lord is with you. He loves to hear your words written in rhyme. It is just six lines not twenty or thirty lines. You missed on the last two lines. Why? They do not rhyme. Suggestion, use Near to rhyme with here or use ear, whatever but rhyme it. Thank you for sharing.
:) Now I see that the Lord loves thee.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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You proved that the Lord is with you. He loves to hear your words written in rhyme. It is just six lines not twenty or thirty lines. You missed on the last two lines. Why? They do not rhyme. Suggestion, use Near to rhyme with here or use ear, whatever but rhyme it. Thank you for sharing.
:) Now I see that the Lord loves thee.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you for your suggestion, a change was made.
