Prom Night
Only the perfect dress will do!15 total reviews
Comment from RodG
What a beautiful "prom dress" this Azalea is wearing. Indeed she is "fetching in fuchsia." I love the alliteration in lines one and three. And for this plant, Prom Night might last several weeks. Rod
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What a beautiful "prom dress" this Azalea is wearing. Indeed she is "fetching in fuchsia." I love the alliteration in lines one and three. And for this plant, Prom Night might last several weeks. Rod
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review! Glad you stopped by today!
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My pleasure.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I loved this. It had a great flow of words. It's spelled 'fuchsia.' Other than that, this poem is really, really great with imagery that I really liked.
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I loved this. It had a great flow of words. It's spelled 'fuchsia.' Other than that, this poem is really, really great with imagery that I really liked.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
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Thanks much!
Comment from Mary Furlong
As charming as a prom queen. An homage to young beauty in human youth as well as in nature. A very accessible poem. Your visual illustration is wonderfully appropriate. Wouldn't it be fun to make a collection of floral illustrations, together with descriptive haikus? Well done.
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As charming as a prom queen. An homage to young beauty in human youth as well as in nature. A very accessible poem. Your visual illustration is wonderfully appropriate. Wouldn't it be fun to make a collection of floral illustrations, together with descriptive haikus? Well done.
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Thank you!!
Comment from January L'Angelle
I like the way this poem flows. It rolls of the tongue really well. It follows the 575 rules precisely. This is a very pretty poem. It is well penned. Good job. January L.
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I like the way this poem flows. It rolls of the tongue really well. It follows the 575 rules precisely. This is a very pretty poem. It is well penned. Good job. January L.
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Thank you!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Prom Night, has the right set up and finds the startling colors of the season in time to salute the time of new beginnings across the board.
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This 5-7-5, Prom Night, has the right set up and finds the startling colors of the season in time to salute the time of new beginnings across the board.
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Comment Written 09-May-2020
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Thank you!
