Prom Night
Only the perfect dress will do!15 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading your contest entry, Mystery Author. You did a great job with the syllable count per line, the beautiful image, the alliteration of 'p' & 'f,' and your overall message. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry, Mystery Author. You did a great job with the syllable count per line, the beautiful image, the alliteration of 'p' & 'f,' and your overall message. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Patty Palmer
A pretty poem. The picture of the bush is so pretty and it compliments your poem perfectly! They're pretty flowers and have the sweetest fragrance!
Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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A pretty poem. The picture of the bush is so pretty and it compliments your poem perfectly! They're pretty flowers and have the sweetest fragrance!
Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on Lady Azalea's prom gown, Patty! ;) Take care out there and enjoy the day! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. I love how beautiful and descriptively you've expressed how this lovely flower is adorned. This is good work and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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I like this. I love how beautiful and descriptively you've expressed how this lovely flower is adorned. This is good work and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Rmocruz
An effective employment of alliteration and personification, as well as clever wordplay. The photo-art is well complimenting.
A pleasantly well-penned, correct to format writing prompt entry.
Best wishes!
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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An effective employment of alliteration and personification, as well as clever wordplay. The photo-art is well complimenting.
A pleasantly well-penned, correct to format writing prompt entry.
Best wishes!
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you!
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You are welcome!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the
5-7-5 A Flower writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. The lines connect grammatically so there is a nice flow. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Hello my friend
A fine entry for the
5-7-5 A Flower writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. The lines connect grammatically so there is a nice flow. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thanx for stopping by on this one, Gypsy! ;) Take good care over there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Samarth Kaashyap
You're probably wondering why I'm reviewing this one. You're also probably wondering why I clicked this one. Boys don't usually do that. But for some reason I have an interest in romance novels to. I mean like when a knight in shining armor comes in. Those kinds of books. Please don't laugh. It feels good to tell somebody this. Anyway, I'll stop my rambling. Good job.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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You're probably wondering why I'm reviewing this one. You're also probably wondering why I clicked this one. Boys don't usually do that. But for some reason I have an interest in romance novels to. I mean like when a knight in shining armor comes in. Those kinds of books. Please don't laugh. It feels good to tell somebody this. Anyway, I'll stop my rambling. Good job.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Why not? Romance is for everyone!! And whether your knight wears shining armor or nylon pantyhose (or maybe both), a romantic heart is always a beautiful thing... some day someone will be proud to win yours! Thank you for your review and have a wonderful week ahead!
Comment from ameen786
Simply awesome! Wonderful, colorful haiku you penned my friend; quite meaningful with superb alliteration; and picture perfect; this one got to be the winner! Good luck!
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Simply awesome! Wonderful, colorful haiku you penned my friend; quite meaningful with superb alliteration; and picture perfect; this one got to be the winner! Good luck!
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you so very much, ameen, for this wonderful review and those awesome stars!! ;) You have truly brightened the week with such brightness!! ;) Be sure to stop by again some time and take good care of you out there this week! ;) Yvette
Comment from moonsunrise
What a striking image of a beautiful azalea bush.
I especially like the description and flow of this well written 5-7-5 poem.
Very well done.
Kind regards and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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What a striking image of a beautiful azalea bush.
I especially like the description and flow of this well written 5-7-5 poem.
Very well done.
Kind regards and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments! Good of you to stop by today!
Comment from Lorraine Rizzuto
I love the visual picture that you paint in this Haiku. Azaleas are my favorite flower and they do much to welcome the beginning of spring. I am assuming that the dress was bright pink and I hope you had a chance to wear it!
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I love the visual picture that you paint in this Haiku. Azaleas are my favorite flower and they do much to welcome the beginning of spring. I am assuming that the dress was bright pink and I hope you had a chance to wear it!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments! Good of you to stop by today!
Comment from Michele Harber
How lovely to envision the plant's beautiful blooms as a prom dress to be shown off. It's a very original concept, and I appreciate that you carry the metaphor through all three lines. You've made very good use of alliteration as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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How lovely to envision the plant's beautiful blooms as a prom dress to be shown off. It's a very original concept, and I appreciate that you carry the metaphor through all three lines. You've made very good use of alliteration as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comments! Glad you stopped by today!
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My pleasure.
