Two Months Later...
Nonet Poetry Contest Entry10 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Wow, that is a commitment and I applaud you. Many families who have one on the "front line" are doing the same thing. I can't find any fault in this poem. I like "eyes on the prize.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Wow, that is a commitment and I applaud you. Many families who have one on the "front line" are doing the same thing. I can't find any fault in this poem. I like "eyes on the prize.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Margaret, for this great review! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Your lovely comments are much appreciated. Thanks and welcome to Fanstory!
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
What a great and beautiful poem! The poem is very short and very sweet. I love how the narrator stays focused and keeps his eyes on the prize. It is very inspirational and creative. Thank you for sharing this! It is very motivational.
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What a great and beautiful poem! The poem is very short and very sweet. I love how the narrator stays focused and keeps his eyes on the prize. It is very inspirational and creative. Thank you for sharing this! It is very motivational.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Hey, Jeffrey. This is such a great review and I thank you so much for it. Your comments are lovely and I'm glad you liked this nonet entry. Much appreciated! Thanks again and enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Comment from DragonSkulls
Hahaha. Looks like you've been waiting for this dumb covet 19 shit to be over so you can have some quality time with your counterpart. I guess on Monday, you'll be getting lucky. Lol. Welcome to the 'well received' page. Lol. Best of luck in the booth, author.
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reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Hahaha. Looks like you've been waiting for this dumb covet 19 shit to be over so you can have some quality time with your counterpart. I guess on Monday, you'll be getting lucky. Lol. Welcome to the 'well received' page. Lol. Best of luck in the booth, author.
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Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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HA! Yes, you are right. Soooo looking forward to Monday. We've been such good little campers and this reward suits us just fine. Thank you for this great review, Mr. Skulls. Much appreciated. LS
Comment from Puzzle
Ohh ohhh ohhh. You got my vote. This is so hot without saying anything overtly sexual. This gives u those butterfly feelings!!! My kind of poetry. Loved this. Good luck in the contest!!
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Ohh ohhh ohhh. You got my vote. This is so hot without saying anything overtly sexual. This gives u those butterfly feelings!!! My kind of poetry. Loved this. Good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Wow!! Quite the review! LOL!! Thank you so much, Puzzle, for this awesome review. Loved it! Clearly you understood everything I poured into this. I appreciate the stars and the good luck wishes. Have a great weekend and thank you again!
Comment from moonsunrise
I really enjoyed reading your lovely, yet very present today, poem.
So close yet so far away. Our new normal for now. Hoping that one day our society will be back to normal, though I'm not sure.
Still, I am so happy that they can be together in two day.
Thanks for sharing.
Kind regards.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I really enjoyed reading your lovely, yet very present today, poem.
So close yet so far away. Our new normal for now. Hoping that one day our society will be back to normal, though I'm not sure.
Still, I am so happy that they can be together in two day.
Thanks for sharing.
Kind regards.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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These are lovely comments, Moonsunrise. I also believe there will be a new normal. I appreciate this great review and all those stars! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an excellent entry for the Nonet poetry contest. It certainly resonated with me, since I am looking forward to giving some people a hug and wondering when the time will come.
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This is an excellent entry for the Nonet poetry contest. It certainly resonated with me, since I am looking forward to giving some people a hug and wondering when the time will come.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you, Susan. Yes, I think we all have someone we can't wait to hug again. I appreciate these lovely comments and all those stars! I'm very glad you liked this. Have a great weekend. Thanks again!
Comment from January L'Angelle
This poem is a testimony to love. It is a well written Nonet. I like the subject of the separation that was concurred by both of you, not realizing how difficult it would be, only to be over in two days from now. This was a lovely poem of joy. Well penned. -January L.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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This poem is a testimony to love. It is a well written Nonet. I like the subject of the separation that was concurred by both of you, not realizing how difficult it would be, only to be over in two days from now. This was a lovely poem of joy. Well penned. -January L.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you so much, January. (love your name!) This is a great review and your comments are lovely. I thank you for all those gracious stars, too. I'm glad you liked this. Much appreciated. Have a great weekend.
Comment from irishauthorme
This reads like a first class romance novel, the attraction, the alliance, the shared intimacy, the forbidding resolution, the disclosure, the agreement,
and finally the rejoining(and rejoicing!)
Very good work, a complete story in just a few lines.
irish
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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This reads like a first class romance novel, the attraction, the alliance, the shared intimacy, the forbidding resolution, the disclosure, the agreement,
and finally the rejoining(and rejoicing!)
Very good work, a complete story in just a few lines.
irish
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Wow! What a terrific review! You really captured it all! lol I'm so glad you liked this. I appreciate these great comments and all those stars. Have a great weekend and thank you so much again!
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I liked this. It was a good use of syllables. I could sense an excitement and a longing in this poem, and you acheived that with few words. Good job on this one.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I liked this. It was a good use of syllables. I could sense an excitement and a longing in this poem, and you acheived that with few words. Good job on this one.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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This is a lovely review, Amanda, and I thank you so much for these lovely comments and gracious stars. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Have a great weekend!
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Best of luck with this entry. Waiting with anticipation, seeking the reward to come was what I felt from this well written Nonet. Hopefully the days have passed. Best regards.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Best of luck with this entry. Waiting with anticipation, seeking the reward to come was what I felt from this well written Nonet. Hopefully the days have passed. Best regards.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you, Kermit, for this great review! I appreciate these lovely comments and all those gracious stars. Yes, these last couple of months have been dreadful in so many ways. But at least one chapter of this is coming to a glorious end. lol Thank you again.
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Thank you for your interest. The one pictured is a Gretsch NY Premiere Resonator. About two years old.
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