Cafe' Espresso
Anything you call it this has to start a new day27 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is an excellent cinquain, my friend. I like that this contest uses the true form rather than just syllable count. Best wishes and stay safe~Debbie
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
This is an excellent cinquain, my friend. I like that this contest uses the true form rather than just syllable count. Best wishes and stay safe~Debbie
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Debbie, thank you.
Comment from Minglement
A very unique and tempting entry for the Cinquain poetry contest. Your choice of words skillfully weave a spell, causing me to covet this most delicious concoction. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
A very unique and tempting entry for the Cinquain poetry contest. Your choice of words skillfully weave a spell, causing me to covet this most delicious concoction. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Minglement, this is a very kind review thank you. I am humbeld by the six-star validation.
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You are most welcome from a coffee lover :) Take care.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A well described coffee here and I could smell the pungent coffee beans as I read your ambient words, a fine write full of lively java here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
A well described coffee here and I could smell the pungent coffee beans as I read your ambient words, a fine write full of lively java here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Dolly, I do thank you and here's a cup of Earl Grey back to you...
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Cafe' Espresso
Hello my friend
Lovely entry for the Write a Cinquain writing prompt contest. I have to have my cup of coffee to start my day...for me is Cafe latte.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
Cafe' Espresso
Hello my friend
Lovely entry for the Write a Cinquain writing prompt contest. I have to have my cup of coffee to start my day...for me is Cafe latte.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Gypsy and I have found a great appreciation for an oak milk latte these days is quite satisfying.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-That is quite an image.
-The syllable count is good.
-You have very good description.
-I think filling that glass would
have you going for a week!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
-That is quite an image.
-The syllable count is good.
-You have very good description.
-I think filling that glass would
have you going for a week!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Pam, thanks. I have found a great appreciation for an oak milk latte these days is quite satisfying.
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You are very welcome. I have not heard of oak milk.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
I pray you and your family are well. This was challenging to me, this poem. I love your poem title, "Cafe' Espresso." This is a lovely poem about the end product, java. You used some beautiful adjectives for describing coffee. I love your summary, "Anything you call it this has to start a new day." This is a wonderful message about coffee. Well-done. No errors. Happy writing:-)
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
Hello,
I pray you and your family are well. This was challenging to me, this poem. I love your poem title, "Cafe' Espresso." This is a lovely poem about the end product, java. You used some beautiful adjectives for describing coffee. I love your summary, "Anything you call it this has to start a new day." This is a wonderful message about coffee. Well-done. No errors. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Joyce, thank you so much! I have found a great appreciation for an oak milk latte these days is quite satisfying.
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You are so welcome.
Comment from Barbaraj1
You have written an excellent Cinquain. You have followed the rules with
the syllables. You picked a very good image. I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
You have written an excellent Cinquain. You have followed the rules with
the syllables. You picked a very good image. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Barbra, thank you for your kind words and good wishes.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are descriptive, interesting, clear and creative.
All I could think about was my morning coffee. The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Have a great weekend!
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
The author's words are descriptive, interesting, clear and creative.
All I could think about was my morning coffee. The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Have a great weekend!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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HARMONY, thank you! Have a wonderful day!
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
You have met the challenge very well in this piece. I love the picture you chose to accompany the poem. This is a very nice read, excuse me now, I have to go pour myself another cup!
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
You have met the challenge very well in this piece. I love the picture you chose to accompany the poem. This is a very nice read, excuse me now, I have to go pour myself another cup!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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A. Loiuse, thank you! I am fond of a good oak milk latte myself.
Comment from Bichon
While I'm not the biggest fan of coffee myself, your poem provided a very detailed description of said beverage. I bet it gets you started immediately in the morning!
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
While I'm not the biggest fan of coffee myself, your poem provided a very detailed description of said beverage. I bet it gets you started immediately in the morning!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Bichon, here's tipping my hat to you. A cup of Darjeeling would be sufficient for me. :)