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Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2

Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "My Mental Cooling Pond "
Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings

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Comment from country ranch writer
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 Comment Written 08-May-2020


reply by the author on 08-May-2020
    Thank you for the Review and Rating the suggestion posted ran together, I Value each Review Suggestions, Please clarify.
reply by country ranch writer on 08-May-2020
    Sorry I will try to do. Better
Comment from SS. Anjum
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Woow such wonderfully you have brought out the reactions to cold water touching us!....i love your title as well the adjectives you have used in this poem. Had fun reading it

 Comment Written 08-May-2020


reply by the author on 08-May-2020
    Thank you for the Review and Compliments. Blessings to you for your time to rate it.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A very unique offering about cold water and its effects on us and its surroundings! ;) I would not however, say this was free verse as it is actually a four-quatrain poem written in aaaa bbbb cccc dddd formatting... Thank you for sharing! ;)

 Comment Written 08-May-2020


reply by the author on 08-May-2020
    Thank you for the Review, Rating and Guidance.
    I did question myself about fitting it in this category, I Appreciate your Continued Support, Poem Construction Support, and Encouragement. Blessings.