Senior Year 2020
Pity the Senior Class of 2020.5 total reviews
Comment from SS. Anjum
Though your theme is good but each line doesn't fall in sync with another....the lines seem broken and separte...Also the third verse doesn't equal 6 syllables.....anyways good luck!
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Though your theme is good but each line doesn't fall in sync with another....the lines seem broken and separte...Also the third verse doesn't equal 6 syllables.....anyways good luck!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Did you read the prompt rules/requirements? I do not know what you mean by "in sync." This is a 2-4-6-8 (syllables) poem. Of course, the lines will seem broken and separate. And please recount line 3. It does have six syllables. GRAD-U-A-TION'S CAN-CELLED.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
As a teacher, I know how disappointed my students are... ugh! :/ :/ Such a wonderful offering for the contest - best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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As a teacher, I know how disappointed my students are... ugh! :/ :/ Such a wonderful offering for the contest - best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Yes, my heart breaks for this year?s senior class. Many thanks for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 2-4-6-8 poem you have penned about graduation 2020 being cancelled. You used very good and true words with very nice imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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This is a very well written 2-4-6-8 poem you have penned about graduation 2020 being cancelled. You used very good and true words with very nice imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thank you very much, Teri, for sharing my short poem and your kind praise.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Yes, this is not a good year for Ending your high school memories as the corona class. I wonder if more people will choose to be nurses in the future, or go the other way to avoid it. Bill
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Yes, this is not a good year for Ending your high school memories as the corona class. I wonder if more people will choose to be nurses in the future, or go the other way to avoid it. Bill
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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The Corona Class is a very appropriate title. Thank you for sharing my short poem, Bill. One wonders if there will be any college classes this fall.
Comment from Ash.writer
It's a bummer for all the seniors graduating. Nice theme to choose for a 2-4-6-8 contest. Short and simple poem and so true. Thanks for sharing it here. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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It's a bummer for all the seniors graduating. Nice theme to choose for a 2-4-6-8 contest. Short and simple poem and so true. Thanks for sharing it here. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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I do appreciate your sharing your views on this crummy situation.
