Comment from ESOSTINE

Good

Beautiful idea which rhythm and flow could be improved by considering some rhyming words unless you have reasons not to. I could easily connect with the poem when in love we surrender to each other with unquestionable trust.

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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reply by the author on 09-May-2020

To my knowledge rhyming words are generally not consider in haiku format. Thanks for the read.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Such a romantic heart wrapped in seventeen syllables! ;) A great one for the contest, anon - thanx so much for sharing! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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reply by the author on 09-May-2020

Thanks much for the read and comments. Appreciated.

Comment from Kermit R. Mullins

Excellent

Best of luck with this 5-7-5 contest entry. "Soul-felt connection," the hands clasped is a great vision but the soul-felt is a very warm embrace on the deeper meaning of love. Very well done. Best regards.

 Comment Written 08-May-2020

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reply by the author on 08-May-2020

Thank you for your read and encouraging comments.

Comment from Amanda Louise Davis

Average

The second line has 6 syllables, not 7, but this is a sweet poem. If you could add a syllable, it would work better for the contest entry. Good luck with this.

 Comment Written 08-May-2020

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reply by the author on 08-May-2020

Thanks for the read but Please check your count "reaffirming" has 4 syllables. Checked on Syllable Counter site at https://www.howmanysyllables.com/syllable_counter/