Summer's knell
Tanka 5/7/5/7/73 total reviews
Comment from Mary Furlong
Very well done. So subtle that one would never guess that you were restricted by an arbitrary syllable count. This is how those obscure forms should be used.
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Very well done. So subtle that one would never guess that you were restricted by an arbitrary syllable count. This is how those obscure forms should be used.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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And a big 'Thanks ' again for those 6 twinkling stars zanya
Comment from Bill Pinder
Well done poem about the changes at the beach and summer vacations due to the covid crisis. Hopefully things return to normal soon and hopefully everyone learns to live together with more peace as a result. Bill
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Well done poem about the changes at the beach and summer vacations due to the covid crisis. Hopefully things return to normal soon and hopefully everyone learns to live together with more peace as a result. Bill
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from papa55mike
Well, if you lived in Florida, the beaches are open but I'll stay home. What a wonderfully written poem!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Well, if you lived in Florida, the beaches are open but I'll stay home. What a wonderfully written poem!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Glad you enjoyed reading this little poetic offering ! zanya
