Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This cinquain, Wordsmith, has the proper 2-4-6-8-2 formatting and follows the specific parts of speech directives as the well-chosen description is penned.

 Comment Written 13-May-2020

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reply by the author on 13-May-2020

Thanks for your read and review.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh, I do like that word: Wordsmith!! ;) :) A wonderful employment of the Cinquain format here - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 12-May-2020

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reply by the author on 12-May-2020

Thank you for the read and review. I like wordsmith also. I think of a writer-- working like a blacksmith pounding his work on the anvil of the mind until he create a satisfactory product.

reply by Y. M. Roger on 12-May-2020

Certainly wanna pound that pencil once in a while... :) :) LOL! Good luck! :)

Comment from Margaret Bednar

Good

A writer is an artist - often a broody one at that at times! You listed the positives - would be fun to see a cinquain of a writer/artists faults :) I think in the fourth line I'd rather see a specific "feeling" other than the word..."sensitive" comes to mind.

 Comment Written 08-May-2020

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reply by the author on 08-May-2020

I like sensitive also but it has too many syllables line 4 according to the rules must contain four words using only eight syllables. Thanks for the read.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

I think you written an excellent poem for the contest
following all the rules as far as I can tell.
Excellent choice of descriptor words and alliteration.
Nicely done
Best wishes to you.
Robert

 Comment Written 08-May-2020

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reply by the author on 08-May-2020

Thanks for the read and the review. Appreciated.