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The Root Of David

contest entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from suep
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Great contest entry. Beautiful presentation and artwork to accompany your well-penned words. I enjoyed the alliteration, too. And, of course, an awesome subject! Nice work ... Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 08-May-2020


reply by the author on 08-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review...
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Well -- just not sure what words to add to such a 'one and done' contest offering! :) ;) Very powerful in both word and presentation! ;) Best of luck to you at the polls! :)

 Comment Written 08-May-2020


reply by the author on 08-May-2020
    Thank you for your review and best wishes...
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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Awesome 2-4-6-8 poem! You've really made the most of it, and have utilized every syllable perfectly.
Consider capitalizing "Lion" and "Lamb," as they are among the many names or titles of Jesus Christ.
Your picture is really beautiful and very impressive.

 Comment Written 08-May-2020


reply by the author on 08-May-2020
    Mary Kay,

    Thanks your kindly for your review. Thanks for reminding me of the need to capitalize Lion and Lamb, your kindness is greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 08-May-2020
    You're very welcome, my friend. Blessings to you too,
    Mary Kay