O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Stephen Force
I enjoyed your acrostic verse and your notes; your illustration and your definition "God Punishes" are consistent with traditional perceptions of man's banishment from Eden. Your notes speak to a greater and more sophisticated interpretation of faith. I find them both compatible, and enjoyed reading them. I must say however I agree with one and not so much the other:) Well done. Steve
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I enjoyed your acrostic verse and your notes; your illustration and your definition "God Punishes" are consistent with traditional perceptions of man's banishment from Eden. Your notes speak to a greater and more sophisticated interpretation of faith. I find them both compatible, and enjoyed reading them. I must say however I agree with one and not so much the other:) Well done. Steve
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from Ulla
Hi there. I read this poem with some apprehension. I'm not religious so can't quite follow down that path. You've written an acrostic, and they are not easy to write. All best. Ulla:)
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Hi there. I read this poem with some apprehension. I'm not religious so can't quite follow down that path. You've written an acrostic, and they are not easy to write. All best. Ulla:)
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello ALCREATOR,
I pray you and your family are well. This is a lovely Acrostic poem. I like your title, "God's O' Divine Eyes." To see God's eyes would be an awesome blessing. I like your imagery of Adam and Eve in the garden of Eden is very good. Through your beautiful words, I can see the loving and strong eyes of God. He is everywhere, all-powerful, and has all knowledge. Thanks for your author's notes. God does not belong to any one religion. I like how you described the Divine's eyes. Praise God. Well-done poem. Thanks - Happy writing:-)
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Hello ALCREATOR,
I pray you and your family are well. This is a lovely Acrostic poem. I like your title, "God's O' Divine Eyes." To see God's eyes would be an awesome blessing. I like your imagery of Adam and Eve in the garden of Eden is very good. Through your beautiful words, I can see the loving and strong eyes of God. He is everywhere, all-powerful, and has all knowledge. Thanks for your author's notes. God does not belong to any one religion. I like how you described the Divine's eyes. Praise God. Well-done poem. Thanks - Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
A Very Well constructed acrostic poem. Much different framework from what I usually see. I can see His Eyes through your words. This poem reminds me of how Lie's need effort whereas Truth has no needs. Thanks for the poem. Best regards.
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A Very Well constructed acrostic poem. Much different framework from what I usually see. I can see His Eyes through your words. This poem reminds me of how Lie's need effort whereas Truth has no needs. Thanks for the poem. Best regards.
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from Ben Colder
This needs a seven but I have only a five to offer. Jesus was and is not religious but man is. Yes, the all seeing eye see it all. My blessings to you and I offer hope for your future.
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This needs a seven but I have only a five to offer. Jesus was and is not religious but man is. Yes, the all seeing eye see it all. My blessings to you and I offer hope for your future.
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Very well done acrostic poem. Your comments at the end were interesting and helpful in reviewing the poem. The image was unique for your piece. Thanks for sharing. ~Brenda
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Very well done acrostic poem. Your comments at the end were interesting and helpful in reviewing the poem. The image was unique for your piece. Thanks for sharing. ~Brenda
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
i thoroughly enjoyed your acrostic, it says what is true about God. He is all seeing. What I also liked was your author's notes, especially the first part, about God not belonging to any religion, community, creed, or anything. God is God not a religion. He just Is. I enjoyed all of it, well done! :)) Sandra xxx
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i thoroughly enjoyed your acrostic, it says what is true about God. He is all seeing. What I also liked was your author's notes, especially the first part, about God not belonging to any religion, community, creed, or anything. God is God not a religion. He just Is. I enjoyed all of it, well done! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from smileycloud
Really interesting way this is set out
the repetition I hardly even noticed as it rolled off the tongue like a prayer
a very strong and relevant prayer
the message is all things rolled into one....the warning the trust the hope the companionship the failure yet there He is...still looking into our hearts and souls
that is the greatest message of all
blessings
have a smiley day
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Really interesting way this is set out
the repetition I hardly even noticed as it rolled off the tongue like a prayer
a very strong and relevant prayer
the message is all things rolled into one....the warning the trust the hope the companionship the failure yet there He is...still looking into our hearts and souls
that is the greatest message of all
blessings
have a smiley day
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from M.G. Tanner
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece of art! The imagery is beautiful and powerful and clearly sets a vibrant atmosphere.
Side not: Your cause for writing is extremely admirable as well
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece of art! The imagery is beautiful and powerful and clearly sets a vibrant atmosphere.
Side not: Your cause for writing is extremely admirable as well
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from Boogienights
This brings up an interesting question. I do believe in God and that he is watching. But why are some people caught and punished right away, while serial killers have gone years without punishment or even being brought to justice? It makes you think. Thanks for sharing.
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This brings up an interesting question. I do believe in God and that he is watching. But why are some people caught and punished right away, while serial killers have gone years without punishment or even being brought to justice? It makes you think. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-May-2020
