O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your spiritual poem. It is well-written and well-received. It is interesting and informative. Your artwork choice is exceptional and it goes well with your powerful message. Thank you for providing your informative author notes, as well. Best wishes!
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I enjoyed reading your spiritual poem. It is well-written and well-received. It is interesting and informative. Your artwork choice is exceptional and it goes well with your powerful message. Thank you for providing your informative author notes, as well. Best wishes!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
Comment from rjuselius
This is an exquisite piece of poetry dear alcreator! I love the way you have crafted the wording and I'm honored to read It.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
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This is an exquisite piece of poetry dear alcreator! I love the way you have crafted the wording and I'm honored to read It.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from royowen
Good advice indeed you have given here my friend, yes indeed, probably the best thing to write and explain God's sight is, He is the all seeing omniscient one , and nothing escapes His all seeing gaze.. well done. Blessings. Roy
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Good advice indeed you have given here my friend, yes indeed, probably the best thing to write and explain God's sight is, He is the all seeing omniscient one , and nothing escapes His all seeing gaze.. well done. Blessings. Roy
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
The rhyming word is the main word eyes, in this acrostic poem except for the last two sentences which is lies. The repetition of eyes emphasizes each sentence and the two last sentences bring the poem to a subtle but explosive close. Everyone is a sinner but not everyone acts out crimes or professes lies; so, if one does they will understand punishment if not immediately, later in their choice of direction and eternal home. giovanni
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The rhyming word is the main word eyes, in this acrostic poem except for the last two sentences which is lies. The repetition of eyes emphasizes each sentence and the two last sentences bring the poem to a subtle but explosive close. Everyone is a sinner but not everyone acts out crimes or professes lies; so, if one does they will understand punishment if not immediately, later in their choice of direction and eternal home. giovanni
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from write hand blue
I read this out of interest to see what is put on this screen. I'm not in the least religious and this page of twaddle confirms my beliefs. I will give you full marks for inventiveness, just so long as you don't believe it all. WHB
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I read this out of interest to see what is put on this screen. I'm not in the least religious and this page of twaddle confirms my beliefs. I will give you full marks for inventiveness, just so long as you don't believe it all. WHB
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
God's O' Divine Eyes
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Hello my friend
This poem reminds me of my childhood in Spain. I went to Catholic school and I was told God was all seeing all Omnipotent, as you said. I seem to remember a symbol of God's eye inside a triangle.
I like your poem, well done.
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God's O' Divine Eyes
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Hello my friend
This poem reminds me of my childhood in Spain. I went to Catholic school and I was told God was all seeing all Omnipotent, as you said. I seem to remember a symbol of God's eye inside a triangle.
I like your poem, well done.
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from Patty Palmer
I feel your poem is very well-written. Gods' eyes are everywhere all the time. He can see everything we do, knows what's in our hearts. We cannot hide our feelings from him.
Thank you for the beautiful poem!
God bless!
Patty
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I feel your poem is very well-written. Gods' eyes are everywhere all the time. He can see everything we do, knows what's in our hearts. We cannot hide our feelings from him.
Thank you for the beautiful poem!
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a well-written acrostic poem about the divine eyes of God. They see everything everywhere. They see the just and the unjust and He is the final judge.
Well done.
Blessings and stay well.
Janet
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This is a well-written acrostic poem about the divine eyes of God. They see everything everywhere. They see the just and the unjust and He is the final judge.
Well done.
Blessings and stay well.
Janet
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from nomi338
Given all that you wrote, when a group of people identify themselves as in those commonly recognized as Christians, regularly aligning themselves with a book containing rules, laws that must be followed to please God. How can these people violate the second greatest commandment from God, "You must love your fellow man as you love yourself." How can they go about killing and abusing their fellows as easily as they spit upon the ground. In fact this particular group of Christians seem to revere killing as much or more than just about anything else at all.
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Given all that you wrote, when a group of people identify themselves as in those commonly recognized as Christians, regularly aligning themselves with a book containing rules, laws that must be followed to please God. How can these people violate the second greatest commandment from God, "You must love your fellow man as you love yourself." How can they go about killing and abusing their fellows as easily as they spit upon the ground. In fact this particular group of Christians seem to revere killing as much or more than just about anything else at all.
Comment Written 08-May-2020
Comment from Cedar
This is a very spiritual poem. Yes, God's Eyes are always watching over His children and we must always remain faithful to Him.
You did a great job of expressing your strong faith in this writing. Thank you for sharing...Bill
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This is a very spiritual poem. Yes, God's Eyes are always watching over His children and we must always remain faithful to Him.
You did a great job of expressing your strong faith in this writing. Thank you for sharing...Bill
Comment Written 08-May-2020
