O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi I love this write about God seeing everything. That He punishes all evil doers. Yes true...may be. Allow me please. Suppose there is a bale of gold and instead of taking what you need to lead a decent happy life, you take everything. One you attract more attackers and second the weight crushes you, third the fear and worries to be mugged on the way is more potent.
God did not punish you for this greed or selfishness if you are attacked, or crushed under the weight or mugged.
You punish yourself...you create your own punishment and carry it with you all the time. God is not a slave driver. If He had to punish us , He would have torn us humanity to pieces for crucifying Poor Jesus, and bled him. He did not. Whatever is happening is man's own doing. He guides us out of the conundrum if we go to him with pure heart. But he would never say go damn you for what you did. Sorry, but too many people are quick to lay the blame on God. If that's true then I can tell you there is no way we can get out of this damned corona virus sickness.who can? No bad intended sorry
Benny Beeharry
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Hi I love this write about God seeing everything. That He punishes all evil doers. Yes true...may be. Allow me please. Suppose there is a bale of gold and instead of taking what you need to lead a decent happy life, you take everything. One you attract more attackers and second the weight crushes you, third the fear and worries to be mugged on the way is more potent.
God did not punish you for this greed or selfishness if you are attacked, or crushed under the weight or mugged.
You punish yourself...you create your own punishment and carry it with you all the time. God is not a slave driver. If He had to punish us , He would have torn us humanity to pieces for crucifying Poor Jesus, and bled him. He did not. Whatever is happening is man's own doing. He guides us out of the conundrum if we go to him with pure heart. But he would never say go damn you for what you did. Sorry, but too many people are quick to lay the blame on God. If that's true then I can tell you there is no way we can get out of this damned corona virus sickness.who can? No bad intended sorry
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 10-May-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Divine Eyes
Incessant Insightful Eyes
Visibly Invisible Eyes
Incessantly Interpreting Eyes
Non-stop non-blinking Eyes
Evidently punish all mortal vices.
I was fascinated by Jesus eyes in all the icons from the church, I always felt compassion and a kind of forgiving understanding. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Divine Eyes
Incessant Insightful Eyes
Visibly Invisible Eyes
Incessantly Interpreting Eyes
Non-stop non-blinking Eyes
Evidently punish all mortal vices.
I was fascinated by Jesus eyes in all the icons from the church, I always felt compassion and a kind of forgiving understanding. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is a wonderful acrostic poem. I love the theme of God's eyes. The poem follows all that an acrostic poem should be and more. It rhymes and it has an incredible story. Amazing! -January L.
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This is a wonderful acrostic poem. I love the theme of God's eyes. The poem follows all that an acrostic poem should be and more. It rhymes and it has an incredible story. Amazing! -January L.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
Comment from Ben1
Good and interesting poem. If was very creative with the way you used your words. I do agree with you that no harm can come when you choose God's side.
I did notice though that when you said Visibly you made the V and i blue. I don't know if you meant to.
Either way good job with the poem, God bless.
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Good and interesting poem. If was very creative with the way you used your words. I do agree with you that no harm can come when you choose God's side.
I did notice though that when you said Visibly you made the V and i blue. I don't know if you meant to.
Either way good job with the poem, God bless.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
Comment from karenina
I've enjoyed the many Acrostic poems posted--most for the contest. Yours comes down on the heavy side, to be sure-- I don't disagree that God ought not be ascribed as belonging to any one groups religion...but I'm a new testament kind of gal and prefer to think not of God punishing the sinners, but embracing them and helping them seek salvation.--Karenina
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I've enjoyed the many Acrostic poems posted--most for the contest. Yours comes down on the heavy side, to be sure-- I don't disagree that God ought not be ascribed as belonging to any one groups religion...but I'm a new testament kind of gal and prefer to think not of God punishing the sinners, but embracing them and helping them seek salvation.--Karenina
Comment Written 09-May-2020
Comment from Sally Law
This truth led me to Christianity in my search for truth. God does see all and we fool ourselves if we think He does not. In Christ, I have found mercy and a place of forgiveness for my own sins. He made me a new person. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
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This truth led me to Christianity in my search for truth. God does see all and we fool ourselves if we think He does not. In Christ, I have found mercy and a place of forgiveness for my own sins. He made me a new person. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
Comment Written 09-May-2020
Comment from Rmocruz
You have effectively employed repetition in this inspiring rhymed spiritual
acrostic. Your author notes are enlightening as well as informative.
Well constructed and exceptional overall!
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You have effectively employed repetition in this inspiring rhymed spiritual
acrostic. Your author notes are enlightening as well as informative.
Well constructed and exceptional overall!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I liked your use of assonance, with the O sounds and also the plays on eyes and the "I" sound. Good poem rejoicing in God's character. What is God like? All those lovely o's.
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I liked your use of assonance, with the O sounds and also the plays on eyes and the "I" sound. Good poem rejoicing in God's character. What is God like? All those lovely o's.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think you made another great and amazing poem! God has amazing eyes, and his grace is what we need. I like how you showed the different eyes of God. It is a very well written and creative poem! Thank you for continuing to share your work.
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I think you made another great and amazing poem! God has amazing eyes, and his grace is what we need. I like how you showed the different eyes of God. It is a very well written and creative poem! Thank you for continuing to share your work.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
i think the repetition works well throughout this. And it helps create a natural rhythm as you read it. The different line lengths work well, too. I think this makes the repetition work and not feel too repetitive.
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i think the repetition works well throughout this. And it helps create a natural rhythm as you read it. The different line lengths work well, too. I think this makes the repetition work and not feel too repetitive.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
