O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Enoima Okon
"Visibly invisible" that phrase really got my attention Alcreator.
The poem is neatly arranged and followed in the ideas or information intended to pass across. I love the image too.
Well, good luck in the contest.
Eno
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"Visibly invisible" that phrase really got my attention Alcreator.
The poem is neatly arranged and followed in the ideas or information intended to pass across. I love the image too.
Well, good luck in the contest.
Eno
Comment Written 11-May-2020
Comment from oliver818
This is a nice poem. It flows well and has a good feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the imagery you used. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
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This is a nice poem. It flows well and has a good feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the imagery you used. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 11-May-2020
Comment from Enzo Lance
A good example to a beginner like me of using repetition without sounding boring.The repetition used in this poem create urgency to absorb the poets message. The third stanza used the ingredient of alliteration plus repetition. Putting those in acrostic poem is very hard but you did a great job.
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A good example to a beginner like me of using repetition without sounding boring.The repetition used in this poem create urgency to absorb the poets message. The third stanza used the ingredient of alliteration plus repetition. Putting those in acrostic poem is very hard but you did a great job.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
Comment from qinluo
I am exited about the link of poem,but i am curious why need to do that..I am so young as I am.Got experience,do you have the answer¿and seams to ,ah you are somebody in here¿bling bling the rank
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I am exited about the link of poem,but i am curious why need to do that..I am so young as I am.Got experience,do you have the answer¿and seams to ,ah you are somebody in here¿bling bling the rank
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you.
I am confused. Please, please and please clarify yourself, your point is not clear to me.
Please explain and clarify the following grammatically incorrect sentences:
I am so young as I am.Got experience,do you have the answer¿and seams to ,ah you are somebody in here¿bling bling the rank
Please help me to understand your point, and I hope you would feel free (I may be younger to you in all aspects) to explain and clarify your point of view, please never hesitate to offer your enrich point of view, suggestion, advice etc.
Looking forward to receiving your wise words,
With the kindest personal regards,
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
11th May, 2020
Monday
PS: I am really weak in English, I am a learner, please help me anyway you can ever
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I just said something truthful bling bilng rank is truth.If you misunderstond something，i apologize to you.Anybody will have some problems when they are birds，so asking some stupid questions is normal.You thought that?s stupid,is truth .I wouldn?t deny.But,said some about ?all aspects younger to you,is unnecessary.?Do you know what?s the secret of good mood ？Don't be so sensitive.Life needs humor,being relaxed will be better.
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I just said something truthful bling bilng rank is truth.If you misunderstond something,I apologize to you.Anybody will have some problems when they are birds，so asking some stupid questions is normal.You thought that?s stupid,is truth .I wouldn?t deny.But,said some about ?all aspects younger to you,?is unnecessary.Do you know what?s the secret of good mood ？Don't be so sensitive.Life needs humor,being relaxed will be better.
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That?s the problem of procedure.The punctuaion can?t be in normal operation.
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Thank you for that advice about language,I will amend that
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You haven't understand my story in another expression ，which is about culture different from western，even though carried the same language ，but Chinese culture is more restraining，so its useless read immediately .But I will amend my English expression,thank you for your time to remind me.So much.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"God's O" Divine Eyes", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Each line of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"God's O" Divine Eyes", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Each line of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
Comment from Diana Kane
The repetition does make it strong so I understand why you use it. It can be a little bit convoluted. That could just be me. It does make me feel like I'm being taught instead of being asked to listen. That could be your intent though so...
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The repetition does make it strong so I understand why you use it. It can be a little bit convoluted. That could just be me. It does make me feel like I'm being taught instead of being asked to listen. That could be your intent though so...
Comment Written 11-May-2020
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Comment from pharp
My friend,
You did an outstanding job in the penning of this acrostic poem about God's Divine eyes. There is nothing we can hide from God, He is all knowing and sees all. Thanks for sharing a most profound read.
Blessings...Portia
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My friend,
You did an outstanding job in the penning of this acrostic poem about God's Divine eyes. There is nothing we can hide from God, He is all knowing and sees all. Thanks for sharing a most profound read.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 10-May-2020
Comment from flylikeaneagle
alcreator: great acrostic about God's eyes. You are creative in
your writing. Visibly Invisible Eyes
Incessantly Interpreting Eyes great use of alliteration.
Makes us think that God can see this covid 19 evil and destroy
it all soon. Praise God. flylikeaneagle
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alcreator: great acrostic about God's eyes. You are creative in
your writing. Visibly Invisible Eyes
Incessantly Interpreting Eyes great use of alliteration.
Makes us think that God can see this covid 19 evil and destroy
it all soon. Praise God. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 10-May-2020
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a stunning poem, a tribute to the Father of us all, reminding us of His supreme knowledge of all that transpires within and without by humanity, His progeny - as usual with this writer, written in humility and reverence...
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In my opinion, a stunning poem, a tribute to the Father of us all, reminding us of His supreme knowledge of all that transpires within and without by humanity, His progeny - as usual with this writer, written in humility and reverence...
Comment Written 10-May-2020
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for pointing out that this poem is an acrostic, because I probably would have missed the form without your description. I relished your repeats of "O'" to signify "Omniscient," "Omnipresent," and "Omnipotent". Cheers- Joan
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Thank you for pointing out that this poem is an acrostic, because I probably would have missed the form without your description. I relished your repeats of "O'" to signify "Omniscient," "Omnipresent," and "Omnipotent". Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 10-May-2020
