O My God and Mother Nature!
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102 total reviews
Comment from laMont Flanagan
The poem glorifies the authority, mercy, compassion, and retribution of GOD. It is an admonition to sinners that GOD is omnipresent and His presence is transparent
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The poem glorifies the authority, mercy, compassion, and retribution of GOD. It is an admonition to sinners that GOD is omnipresent and His presence is transparent
Comment Written 13-May-2020
Comment from estory
I think this was very well conceived and executed... I liked the musical and rhythmic elements you created with all the repetitions of 'eyes'; the invisibly visible eyes, the omnipresent eyes, the divine omnipotent and supremely surveillant eyes. that opening was really strong. All those flashes of images jump around us in a glorious dance. estory
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I think this was very well conceived and executed... I liked the musical and rhythmic elements you created with all the repetitions of 'eyes'; the invisibly visible eyes, the omnipresent eyes, the divine omnipotent and supremely surveillant eyes. that opening was really strong. All those flashes of images jump around us in a glorious dance. estory
Comment Written 13-May-2020
Comment from w.j.debi
Well done acrostic with an interesting message. You describe God's eyes with so many diverse and well-chosen words. It is certainly something to ponder.
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Well done acrostic with an interesting message. You describe God's eyes with so many diverse and well-chosen words. It is certainly something to ponder.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
sure wish I had a six for
you, i also think it's davine
entry for the contest.
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sure wish I had a six for
you, i also think it's davine
entry for the contest.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
Comment from JLR
Very consistently written by Alcreator Litt Dear; No pause, no interruptions pure and simple flowing of pertinent thoughts. About the foible of every man, woman, and child.
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Very consistently written by Alcreator Litt Dear; No pause, no interruptions pure and simple flowing of pertinent thoughts. About the foible of every man, woman, and child.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
Comment from Pamela Peridot
This is one of the longest acrostics I have ever read. In my mind it reads similar to a heavy chant, an interesting effect to say the least. The "visibly invisible" line stuck out at me particularly.
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This is one of the longest acrostics I have ever read. In my mind it reads similar to a heavy chant, an interesting effect to say the least. The "visibly invisible" line stuck out at me particularly.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
Wow....This is a really good poetry and though it simply addresses the vast topic "god" A different approach on this poetry makes it really creative... Love the alliteration in the lines.... Thanks for sharing...
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Wow....This is a really good poetry and though it simply addresses the vast topic "god" A different approach on this poetry makes it really creative... Love the alliteration in the lines.... Thanks for sharing...
Comment Written 11-May-2020
Comment from Spitfire
This sounds like the preaching of an Evangelist or worse, a cult leader. For me, the last line is satire. People get away with crime. Maybe the Corona virus is God's payback.
The format and short sentences and repetition give Him the power.
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This sounds like the preaching of an Evangelist or worse, a cult leader. For me, the last line is satire. People get away with crime. Maybe the Corona virus is God's payback.
The format and short sentences and repetition give Him the power.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
Comment from Susan Larson
What a wonderful acrostic poem. I love how you worked in such nice alliteration along with all the repetition. Omniscient Omnipresent, Supremely Surveillant, Incessant Insightful.
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What a wonderful acrostic poem. I love how you worked in such nice alliteration along with all the repetition. Omniscient Omnipresent, Supremely Surveillant, Incessant Insightful.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
Comment from Alchera
Now it is a real acrostical layout stanzaic structural format and I do like its content and chosen Words to built it up. All the religious thematic subject is true and accepted by those Who believe but many people nowadays think that religion is loving its primordial position and that there will probably be an overturn in all. Great work and Blessings. Tony
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Now it is a real acrostical layout stanzaic structural format and I do like its content and chosen Words to built it up. All the religious thematic subject is true and accepted by those Who believe but many people nowadays think that religion is loving its primordial position and that there will probably be an overturn in all. Great work and Blessings. Tony
Comment Written 11-May-2020
