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Uplifting Poetry Contest Entry

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Comment from Karen Iseminger
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Are there words more uplifting than this poem? It's lovely. I especially love the line "...believe you're important to your friends, and families'. I wanted to include a similar sentiment in my poem but decided to go a different direction. It's so important for people to know they matter. Great work. Good luck!

 Comment Written 08-May-2020


reply by the author on 08-May-2020
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello my friend

A beautiful poem and presentation. A fine entry for the Uplifting Poetry! writing prompt contest. I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-May-2020


reply by the author on 08-May-2020
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from JudyE
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Having a strong self-esteem is so important. You've made some good points in your poem.

I picked up one spag if that's okay:
Believe in yourself,
do something uesful, - spelling - useful

Good luck

 Comment Written 07-May-2020


reply by the author on 07-May-2020
    Thank you! Yes, definitely I will put it in the post. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Well now there's a wonderful free verse to pin to one's mirror to help reinforce that self-esteem each morning! (pssst - many of my students probably don't need this - lol!!) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 07-May-2020


reply by the author on 07-May-2020
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
Comment from January L'Angelle
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This was sure uplifting and made me feel good. It was a shining example of optimism and positivity. I enjoyed that I could "be a fireman" if I wanted to. That made me smile. Good luck in the contest. -January L.

 Comment Written 07-May-2020


reply by the author on 07-May-2020
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Sugarray77
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An excellent free verse that does indeed cheer and uplift the soul. I enjoyed the poem and also how it does encourage us with suggestions of how to stay upbeat. Good luck!

Melissa

 Comment Written 07-May-2020


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    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Margaret Bednar
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I'd like to see a bit more imagery - don't spell it out so much - "do something useful"... instead, perhaps, give me an example of doing something useful. What would that be in your life? Make it real. Does this make sense?

 Comment Written 06-May-2020


reply by the author on 06-May-2020
    Thank you! I will fix the mistakes. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
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Comment from Vanny
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Beautiful said words of wisdom
We need words like this more often for everyone
Our self esteem is down to the ground
We need strong words of motivation and encouragement to help each other to be better individuals
Thanks for the words of wisdom

 Comment Written 06-May-2020


reply by the author on 06-May-2020
    Thank you and you're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!