A Masked Romance
McDonalds serves up more than burgers.8 total reviews
Comment from Dick Waters
You had me from the beginning. I wanted to know if she was going to finally let him know who she is.
Life is full of results...depending on the paths we take. I don't go to the drive-thru's as I have found the love of my life.
I'll try to read more posts and comment on them. Thanks for the encouragement.
Best regards,
Dick
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2020
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You had me from the beginning. I wanted to know if she was going to finally let him know who she is.
Life is full of results...depending on the paths we take. I don't go to the drive-thru's as I have found the love of my life.
I'll try to read more posts and comment on them. Thanks for the encouragement.
Best regards,
Dick
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2020
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I am delighted I ? had you from the beginning,? Dick. Thank you so much for reading my story. Rod
Comment from Thesis
Who can't relate to this story?
I enjoyed how Michelle teased Andy by not revealing who she was. I could just imagine his embarrassment not recognizing who she was. You used the mask well, further frustrating Andy and making him insecure.
The note, yet another tease, was well played and eventually revealed the mystery of who she was. Nice read.
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Who can't relate to this story?
I enjoyed how Michelle teased Andy by not revealing who she was. I could just imagine his embarrassment not recognizing who she was. You used the mask well, further frustrating Andy and making him insecure.
The note, yet another tease, was well played and eventually revealed the mystery of who she was. Nice read.
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed all the teasing in my story, Thesis. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
McDonald's is a wonderful place to dine. But the drive-up is the thing to do right now. I guess you were surprised when you found out it was someone you already was acquainted with from school.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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McDonald's is a wonderful place to dine. But the drive-up is the thing to do right now. I guess you were surprised when you found out it was someone you already was acquainted with from school.
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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ThNk you, Rosemary, for sharing my story.
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
Well done! A very nice way of making the best of a bad situation. Maybe in six months or so they will be able to meet and share a first kiss. Looking forward to chapter two.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Well done! A very nice way of making the best of a bad situation. Maybe in six months or so they will be able to meet and share a first kiss. Looking forward to chapter two.
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Yes, Jerome, there is a chapter two in the future. Thank you for sharing this one.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I like the masks. Very relevant to now obviously. It reminds me of my own small town and the way romances really do play out. Nice job. I hope you keep writing.
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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I like the masks. Very relevant to now obviously. It reminds me of my own small town and the way romances really do play out. Nice job. I hope you keep writing.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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I am very pleased to hear you can relate to my story, Amanda. Thank you for sharing, and I will keep writing.
Comment from Susan X Smith
I like the fact that the disguise was actually a mask protecting the wearer form Corona virus. It was a cute and well-written story of a youthful romantic encounter.
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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I like the fact that the disguise was actually a mask protecting the wearer form Corona virus. It was a cute and well-written story of a youthful romantic encounter.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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I am delighted you like my use of present day "costumes," Susan. Thank you very much for your kind praise.
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is a very cute story for the disguised prompt contest. I liked the way you led me into being really curious as to who it was. I was just as curious as Andy was. Well penned. -January L.
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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This is a very cute story for the disguised prompt contest. I liked the way you led me into being really curious as to who it was. I was just as curious as Andy was. Well penned. -January L.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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I am delighted my story was engaging and drew you in, January. Thank you for sharing and your kind praise.
Comment from Puzzle
Omg what a great entry for this contest!!! What a fantastic us of our current situation. Turning a negative into a positive love story. I absolutely loved it. Great job!
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Omg what a great entry for this contest!!! What a fantastic us of our current situation. Turning a negative into a positive love story. I absolutely loved it. Great job!
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Your review is music to my ears, Puzzle. Thank you so much!
