Millennial Lament
Sedoka poem3 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
A very appropriate topic for today's world.
You have met the requirements of a sedoka- two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Best of luck in the Sedoka Poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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A very appropriate topic for today's world.
You have met the requirements of a sedoka- two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Best of luck in the Sedoka Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from rspoet
You've written two excellent sedoka poems for the contest
that is certainly topical and many will relate to.
Hopefully the pandemic will pass soon, though the effects will linger.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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You've written two excellent sedoka poems for the contest
that is certainly topical and many will relate to.
Hopefully the pandemic will pass soon, though the effects will linger.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your sedoka is very well-written and timely. Yes, the world has changed drastically in every respect! Some are properly concerned and are taking the needed precautions. Some are acting as though nothing's going on--endangering everybody!
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Your sedoka is very well-written and timely. Yes, the world has changed drastically in every respect! Some are properly concerned and are taking the needed precautions. Some are acting as though nothing's going on--endangering everybody!
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Yes such strange times we are experiencing -thanks for sharing zanya
