Couch Potato
Sedoka Poem3 total reviews
Comment from Louise Michelle
Someone was just telling me how fat he's getting as a result of this damn virus. Get off the couch and do some toe touches. Come on, I'm waiting. All right, suit yourself, haha. This was a fun-to-read poem. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Someone was just telling me how fat he's getting as a result of this damn virus. Get off the couch and do some toe touches. Come on, I'm waiting. All right, suit yourself, haha. This was a fun-to-read poem. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad the poem made you laugh. :)
Comment from Susan X Smith
This certainly is a humorous one, although I am not familiar with the Sedoka format. The picture is a great complement and it reminds me of what I now feel. It is not that I am overeating, but how many calories do I need to sit in front of a TV set?
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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This certainly is a humorous one, although I am not familiar with the Sedoka format. The picture is a great complement and it reminds me of what I now feel. It is not that I am overeating, but how many calories do I need to sit in front of a TV set?
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you found it funny and you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A fun offering for the contest that highlights a terrible side-effect of this quarantine business - sofa spuds! ;) :) Good luck at the polls this evening! :) ;)
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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A fun offering for the contest that highlights a terrible side-effect of this quarantine business - sofa spuds! ;) :) Good luck at the polls this evening! :) ;)
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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I have made two stanzas now. I have fixed the mistake. You can review it again now. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
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I have re-reviewed -- good luck! ;)
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Thank you and thank you for the stars, my friend! :)
