Untethered-Never Forgotten
A Nonet Poem18 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
You've managed to create a perfect triangular shape with your poem, which explores the idea of being chained to treasured memories, but not to the detriment of living your current life untethered.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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You've managed to create a perfect triangular shape with your poem, which explores the idea of being chained to treasured memories, but not to the detriment of living your current life untethered.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, descriptive, and creative. The presentation of this poem is awesome. I pondered on the words of this poem. Thank you for the author's notes - there was a sadness in these words. The artwork goes well with this poem.
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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The author's words are interesting, descriptive, and creative. The presentation of this poem is awesome. I pondered on the words of this poem. Thank you for the author's notes - there was a sadness in these words. The artwork goes well with this poem.
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Moving on is almost always difficult as hell, but - as you say - it is the only choice in order to truly live the life we have in front of us. A beautifully crafted nonet, kahpot, with perfect form and a powerful message from the heart! ;) Thanx for sharing, sir, and best of luck! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Moving on is almost always difficult as hell, but - as you say - it is the only choice in order to truly live the life we have in front of us. A beautifully crafted nonet, kahpot, with perfect form and a powerful message from the heart! ;) Thanx for sharing, sir, and best of luck! :) Yvette
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you my friend, yes it is hard but with comfort and reach from words it will be OK, many thanks, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Drew Delaney
Your Nonet Poem is well written! The lines form a perfect V. I am so sorry to read that you have lost your loved one. Writing is a good form of therapy. Keep strong! Drew
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Your Nonet Poem is well written! The lines form a perfect V. I am so sorry to read that you have lost your loved one. Writing is a good form of therapy. Keep strong! Drew
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful and understanding comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Untethered-Never Forgotten
by kahpot
Hello, Kahpot,
Beautiful Nonet Poem about the loved ones we leave behind. I can relate. I like the presentation too. Well done my friend ð???
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Untethered-Never Forgotten
by kahpot
Hello, Kahpot,
Beautiful Nonet Poem about the loved ones we leave behind. I can relate. I like the presentation too. Well done my friend ð???
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet about lovers and friends who are not always forever. Some friends can be not good for you, and it is sometimes to let them go, even when it breaks your heart.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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A very well-written Nonet about lovers and friends who are not always forever. Some friends can be not good for you, and it is sometimes to let them go, even when it breaks your heart.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you, and yes to move on we must let go, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your nonet reads well. Your syllable count is correct per line. I like the message given to readers about your past love interests. You wrote in a non-judgmental way. The art is a good pairing, too. Your lines form a nice triangle. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Your nonet reads well. Your syllable count is correct per line. I like the message given to readers about your past love interests. You wrote in a non-judgmental way. The art is a good pairing, too. Your lines form a nice triangle. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you Jan, as always your comments and help are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from susand3022
Hi Kahpot, I liked this Nonet... all syllables present and accounted for. And in all the right places too! ;) I love it when we can find things to keep close about past relationships... it's too bad when we can't! ;)
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Hi Kahpot, I liked this Nonet... all syllables present and accounted for. And in all the right places too! ;) I love it when we can find things to keep close about past relationships... it's too bad when we can't! ;)
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you very much, yes we must try to take the best along with us, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your skillfully-written, descriptive nonet conveys an appealing, meaningful message about the power of memories, how we can call them forth when we need them.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Your skillfully-written, descriptive nonet conveys an appealing, meaningful message about the power of memories, how we can call them forth when we need them.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you for these wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
Our precious memories will always shine, untarnished like gold. And untethered, they rise to give us joy as we recall a past love that will never die. Even when we do move on.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Our precious memories will always shine, untarnished like gold. And untethered, they rise to give us joy as we recall a past love that will never die. Even when we do move on.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you, and yes our memories do and should help us move on, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
