Comment from ngage

Excellent

Mysterious chapter Ms Shana. I like your artwork choice and it looks to be interesting seeing you've chosen Keanu Reeves as your character Joseph. I like your choice as a big fan of Keanu Reeves.
I hope the Shadow doesn't talk Joseph into killing Carrie and her roommate. It's looking very interesting so far.
Keep yourself safe! I will be watching for your next chapter.

Nate

 Comment Written 03-May-2020

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reply by the author on 05-May-2020

Thanks Nate :)

I'm a big fan of Keanu Reeves and when I created Joseph, his image came to mind. I hope I can get more time to write in this series. I've been busy with re-editing my other books and got behind. I appreciate your support!

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from cdefan

Excellent

Another exciting chapter! So, now we know what Josesph looks like, Keanu Reeves. I hope he doesn't kill Carrie. It sounds like they might like each other but the Shadow may have other plan.

Great writing!

 Comment Written 03-May-2020

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reply by the author on 05-May-2020

Thanks Cdefan :)

When I started writing Joseph's character, Keanu came to mind. I hope everyone likes the idea. I'm a big fan of his. Maybe Joesph will keep the Shadow from wanting to kill Carrie. We'll see...

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

I saw you'd posted and thought I wonder if it'll be action packed, horror filled or romantic this week. I never know with you. That's not good the two of them alone, especially with the shadow lurking just under the surface. Your chapter is well-written, very interesting as always. I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 03-May-2020

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reply by the author on 05-May-2020

Thank you, Mistydawn :)

Yes, you never know how a chapter is going to go... maybe romance and then maybe horror. I love the two! Maybe Joseph can keep the Shadow from wanting to kill Carrie. I think Joseph is a little smitten with her so we'll see what happens. Besides... Carrie might be able to help Joseph.
Thanks for all your support! I hope I can find time to write more this week. I've gotten behind.

Big hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

This posting sent chills up and down my spine. I wanted to scream out to them to get out of there and call Jessica's uncle. Also perfect pics. Good luck with your re- editing.

 Comment Written 03-May-2020

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reply by the author on 05-May-2020

Thank you, Faye :)

Yes, Carrie is left with a handsome guy that is also possessed by an evil entity. But maybe Joseph will change the Shadow's mind about Carrie since he's a little smitten with her. We'll see...
I hope I can fit some writing in this week. My work schedule is crazy and I want to get all my other books re-edited. They are so wordy. It's almost like writing the books over. Arg! LOL!

Thanks for all your support!
Big hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 05-May-2020

I wish you the best with the rewrites. Continue to love the series and the characters. Hope you stay well and safe.
Hugs,
Faye

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

A great chapter filled with all kinds of tension. I didn't find a single mistake. If I had a six it would be yours. I am really curious about how they're going to catch this bad boy. Have a good night. Shirley

 Comment Written 02-May-2020

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reply by the author on 05-May-2020

Thank you, Shirley :)

I appreciate all your kind words of encouragement. Maybe Joseph can talk the Shadow into giving Carrie a break since he's a little smitten with her. Maybe some romance might be around the corner for them. Who knows... anything is possible. Love can tame the beast.

Thanks again for your support!
Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

Jessica has detected something behind the eyes of the handsome stranger. And likewise the "thing" that is inhabiting Joseph, she has a distinct feeling of doom. So things are starting to "hot up" now. You are a most accomplished writer, another beautifully written episode dear Shana, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 02-May-2020

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reply by the author on 05-May-2020

Thank you, Roy :)

I'm having fun creating new drama for my characters. I think maybe Joseph needs Carrie's help with getting rid of the Shadow. There's always hope to change. You know how I am. I love to turn evil into goodness. Hopefully I can find time to write a new chapter this week.

Thanks for your awesome feedback and support my friend!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 05-May-2020

That?s right, you?re good at turning baddies into repentant goodies.

Comment from Ashtar Zaidi

Excellent

Very Interesting, Proper elaboration, good flow, praiseworthy work, i really enjoyed it, thank you so much for sharing it, God bless you.. :) ~Ashtar~

 Comment Written 02-May-2020

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reply by the author on 02-May-2020

Thank you, Ashtar :)

So glad you enjoyed. Your feedback is encouraging. Stay safe & have a great weekend.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Ashtar Zaidi on 02-May-2020

My pleasure... :)

Comment from January L'Angelle

Excellent

Keep going. The story is getting better and better. I like the werewolf parts when you write about those. Your dialogue is strong and the story line is good. Well done. -January L.

 Comment Written 02-May-2020

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reply by the author on 02-May-2020

Thank you, January :)

So glad you enjoyed the chapter. It's fun to create new adventures for my characters, especially about werewolves. Stay safe & have a great weekend!

Sincerely,
Shana :)