hunkered down in a bunker
5-7-5 (a cold, rainy night)3 total reviews
Comment from ValKul
I like this very much; I can completely imagine the awful situation that so many soldiers have gone through, especially with the accompaniment of the picture. So miserable, and you nailed it. Good job and good luck.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
I like this very much; I can completely imagine the awful situation that so many soldiers have gone through, especially with the accompaniment of the picture. So miserable, and you nailed it. Good job and good luck.
Comment Written 31-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Thanks Val for your review and good wishes. The winning entry for this contest was truly light years ahead of its 2nd and 3rd place finishers, including me. I often review the winner's posts because she writes Haiku and 5-7-5s, my typical
FS post - contest or not.
Mark
Comment from victor 66
There are very few parts of war that are accommodating including the weather. You can have heat, rain, snow and lots of humidity. Strange, wars are never fought in an ideal location where it's sunny and 70°. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
There are very few parts of war that are accommodating including the weather. You can have heat, rain, snow and lots of humidity. Strange, wars are never fought in an ideal location where it's sunny and 70°. Best wishes.
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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Yes, war is hell! Methinks the soldier?s plight is never easy. Even re-entry into society is not always ideal. Thanks for your review and stars.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from zanya
Yes a stark reminder of the chilling reality of war, be it long ago or recently- essentially the modus operandi is similar -a powerful statement in a short poetic format
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
Yes a stark reminder of the chilling reality of war, be it long ago or recently- essentially the modus operandi is similar -a powerful statement in a short poetic format
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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Thanks Zanya.
I was never in the military, but I imagine the horror the soldiers frequently faced in foreign lands defending our freedoms or those of others.