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hunkered down in a bunker

5-7-5 (a cold, rainy night)

3 total reviews 
Comment from ValKul
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I like this very much; I can completely imagine the awful situation that so many soldiers have gone through, especially with the accompaniment of the picture. So miserable, and you nailed it. Good job and good luck.

 Comment Written 31-May-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
    Thanks Val for your review and good wishes. The winning entry for this contest was truly light years ahead of its 2nd and 3rd place finishers, including me. I often review the winner's posts because she writes Haiku and 5-7-5s, my typical
    FS post - contest or not.

    Mark
Comment from victor 66
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There are very few parts of war that are accommodating including the weather. You can have heat, rain, snow and lots of humidity. Strange, wars are never fought in an ideal location where it's sunny and 70°. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 29-May-2020


reply by the author on 29-May-2020
    Yes, war is hell! Methinks the soldier?s plight is never easy. Even re-entry into society is not always ideal. Thanks for your review and stars.
reply by victor 66 on 26-Jun-2020
    You are most welcome.
Comment from zanya
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Yes a stark reminder of the chilling reality of war, be it long ago or recently- essentially the modus operandi is similar -a powerful statement in a short poetic format

 Comment Written 29-May-2020


reply by the author on 29-May-2020
    Thanks Zanya.

    I was never in the military, but I imagine the horror the soldiers frequently faced in foreign lands defending our freedoms or those of others.