White Mountains
ode to winter contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
Congrats on this little beauty. You have captured it perfectly in so few syllables allowed. I wish I had a six left to bestow. Perfect pairing with the photo too. - Wendy
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Congrats on this little beauty. You have captured it perfectly in so few syllables allowed. I wish I had a six left to bestow. Perfect pairing with the photo too. - Wendy
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Hi Wendy, thank you for your compliment and virtual six. Dove
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Reading your poem makes me feel chilled to the bones. I'm so glad that we are experiencing spring even though we have the upset of the virus. I hope we can beat this stuff!
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Reading your poem makes me feel chilled to the bones. I'm so glad that we are experiencing spring even though we have the upset of the virus. I hope we can beat this stuff!
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Dear Rosemary, I was hoping readers would feel the "chill" I wanted to bring out in the poem. Thank you for your review. I won first place in the contest. Dovemarie
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Brrrrrr.... Never been in the mountains in the winter, but to behold them from the valley is gorgeous! :) Great 'ode' to the cold season!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Brrrrrr.... Never been in the mountains in the winter, but to behold them from the valley is gorgeous! :) Great 'ode' to the cold season!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Dear Yvette, thanks for your kind words, review, and good luck wishes.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Although the contest requirements were for a 5-7-5 poem about "winter", and yours is a 5-5-5, I loved it so much, that I still wanted to grant it 5 stars.
The poem, together with the beautiful photo, shows me all the majesty of snow, cold, and winter.
Well done!
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Although the contest requirements were for a 5-7-5 poem about "winter", and yours is a 5-5-5, I loved it so much, that I still wanted to grant it 5 stars.
The poem, together with the beautiful photo, shows me all the majesty of snow, cold, and winter.
Well done!
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Dear Marjon, I edited my poem about winter. I hope it made the contest.
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Hope so for you too! It is worth it.
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Nice 5-7-5 prompt entry. The artwork compliments your very visual words and made me feel a bit chilly reading it. I prefer the heat of the sun, but I've lived in the mountains for years. Your description in right on target. Best regards.
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Nice 5-7-5 prompt entry. The artwork compliments your very visual words and made me feel a bit chilly reading it. I prefer the heat of the sun, but I've lived in the mountains for years. Your description in right on target. Best regards.
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you for your review.
