Rational Awareness
This moment is all we truly have...52 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Forever and this moment are virtually unknown, but today is here. Live it, love it, enjoy it. Tomorrow may never come. We need not just pass the time of day, but try to accomplish something. Great poem!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Forever and this moment are virtually unknown, but today is here. Live it, love it, enjoy it. Tomorrow may never come. We need not just pass the time of day, but try to accomplish something. Great poem!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, Rebecca! Just trying to keep the positivity flowing! Take care, my lady! Yvette
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You succeeded!
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Hooray!! ;) :) :) Keep on smiling, my lady!! ;)
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I do. I want to make happy wrinkles. ha ha
Comment from damommy
So true that this moment is all we have. Your 3-6-9 suite is beautifully presented, and gives much cause to ponder.
Love the photo. Are you finishing up with all your paperwork and grading?
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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So true that this moment is all we have. Your 3-6-9 suite is beautifully presented, and gives much cause to ponder.
Love the photo. Are you finishing up with all your paperwork and grading?
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Hey there, Yvonne - thanx so much for your review on this one! :) The blonde gets a bit introspective once in a while - lol! ;) Take care and enjoy some fresh air and sunshine today, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from richie b
Beautiful thoughts that transcend into wisdom. Much to
be gained by finding solace in the moment. Your poem offers
peace, calmness and an awareness of being.
Your poem teaches that the future is veiled by mists of
mystery and uncertainty. Enjoy the Blessings of today.
Peace,
Richie
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Beautiful thoughts that transcend into wisdom. Much to
be gained by finding solace in the moment. Your poem offers
peace, calmness and an awareness of being.
Your poem teaches that the future is veiled by mists of
mystery and uncertainty. Enjoy the Blessings of today.
Peace,
Richie
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Hey there, Richie - thanx so much for your review on this one! :) The blonde gets a bit introspective once in a while - lol! ;) Take care and enjoy some fresh air and sunshine today! ;) Yvette
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I like the grounding aspect of this poem, and I like the inclusion of how tomorrow is a vision unattained and sometimes possessing the feeling of being elusive. The idea that one can be proved alive through warm touches is interesting.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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I like the grounding aspect of this poem, and I like the inclusion of how tomorrow is a vision unattained and sometimes possessing the feeling of being elusive. The idea that one can be proved alive through warm touches is interesting.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Crystie! I always enjoy your thoughtful reviews - they mean more than you know! Take care, my lady! Yvette
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Deeply thoughtful, philosophical poem, full of self-awareness and reflection. In our best moments, I think most of us have such revelations of consciousness, but the majority of people never express it, at least not in writing. I enjoyed your imagery and choice of words, which, together, form eloquent poetry in free verse. Your colors and image make a delightful presentation of this 3-6-9 offering.
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Deeply thoughtful, philosophical poem, full of self-awareness and reflection. In our best moments, I think most of us have such revelations of consciousness, but the majority of people never express it, at least not in writing. I enjoyed your imagery and choice of words, which, together, form eloquent poetry in free verse. Your colors and image make a delightful presentation of this 3-6-9 offering.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you, beautiful shining lady for up North -- these stars and your awesome review are the perfect way to 'let go'! :) You know the blonde does get a bit introspective once in a while - lol! ;) Take care and enjoy some fresh air and sunshine today! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Southern Lady! Not ditzy at all, lol. Yes, we did have a beautiful day. - Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your 3 6 9 poem is excellent in all respects You chose strong, vivid words to convey a strong message about how precious RIGHT NOW is. I especially like the personification of this moment.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Your 3 6 9 poem is excellent in all respects You chose strong, vivid words to convey a strong message about how precious RIGHT NOW is. I especially like the personification of this moment.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Janice! Just trying to keep the positivity flowing! Take care, my lady! Yvette
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Wow! Beautiful and lovely as always. Well penned down, and a very strong entry for the contest. My very best wishes with the committee. Cheers and kudos!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Wow! Beautiful and lovely as always. Well penned down, and a very strong entry for the contest. My very best wishes with the committee. Cheers and kudos!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Precious, and keep smiling out there! Good to hear from you! Yvette
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
To live in the moment, to be able to say: " ... Yes I am here ..." is indeed a powerful message. This is a well written poem with a profound message. Thank you for sharing and good fortune in the contest - Jerry
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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To live in the moment, to be able to say: " ... Yes I am here ..." is indeed a powerful message. This is a well written poem with a profound message. Thank you for sharing and good fortune in the contest - Jerry
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Hey there, Jerry - thanx so much for your review on this one! :) The blonde gets a bit introspective once in a while - lol! ;) Take care and enjoy some fresh air and sunshine today! ;) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful and I like the progression from Forever to a more definite Tomorrow and finally, to the very tangible present moment in the last stanza. Great to remember all the blessings of being alive. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Beautiful and I like the progression from Forever to a more definite Tomorrow and finally, to the very tangible present moment in the last stanza. Great to remember all the blessings of being alive. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Helen! Just trying to keep the positivity flowing here! Take care, my lady! Yvette
Comment from amada
We need uplifting poems of light and goodness in these troublesome days. Sometimes it all comes from our interior life. This poem here reminded me to breath, smile, and be appreciative for another day.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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We need uplifting poems of light and goodness in these troublesome days. Sometimes it all comes from our interior life. This poem here reminded me to breath, smile, and be appreciative for another day.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much for stopping in for the review on this one, amada - be sure to drop by the front porch here anytime! :) Take care and have a wonderful upcoming weekend! :) Yvette
