NaPoWriMo 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "An Ode to My Dream Living Room "Annual napowrimo prologue and poetry submission
9 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Wow--that is quite a dream living room! Ours is too cluttered with art and books! I found your rhymes appealing and "much to discover" in the "striking room" along with the surprise "goat"! Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Wow--that is quite a dream living room! Ours is too cluttered with art and books! I found your rhymes appealing and "much to discover" in the "striking room" along with the surprise "goat"! Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Hi Joan! I have a media cabinet that's pretty cluttered with books, art and entertainment stuff too. It would be nice to be maintained particular. Lolz. You're nice. Thank you :)
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Thanks for letting me know I'm not alone in my clutter! More smiles- Joan
Comment from BeasPeas
Well, I do like this room and your description of it right down to the goat. This is a dramatic living room and suits you as an actress. The goat is the playful touch that brings out the quirkiness that I enjoy so much in your writing. Rhyme scheme is interesting with its variations. All works well together. Hugs, Marilyn
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Well, I do like this room and your description of it right down to the goat. This is a dramatic living room and suits you as an actress. The goat is the playful touch that brings out the quirkiness that I enjoy so much in your writing. Rhyme scheme is interesting with its variations. All works well together. Hugs, Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Hi! I want a teacup puppy, but heard there are teacup goats gaining popularity too. I like petting zoo goats, but they are too big. Lolz. It's just a free verse ode with rhymes for fun. Thank you :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ode to a dream living room. It is a great living room if we have that big space available in a smaller area it would look and feel cramped a bit unless the furniture is smaller.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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A very well-written ode to a dream living room. It is a great living room if we have that big space available in a smaller area it would look and feel cramped a bit unless the furniture is smaller.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Small like a dollhouse. Cute image... Lolz.
Thank you :)
Comment from Irish Rain
The picture is so pretty!
I like your description of your dream
living room! Sounds awesome.
Mine would be books, chintz, and big windows.
Great fun to dream!
Loved this,
stay well,
blessings...
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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The picture is so pretty!
I like your description of your dream
living room! Sounds awesome.
Mine would be books, chintz, and big windows.
Great fun to dream!
Loved this,
stay well,
blessings...
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Hi Judy! Big windows are nice. Daydreaming come to life. Hahahahaha. You're nice. Thank you :)
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Thank you also!! You've sparked my imagination!! Be well, Happy weekend!!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job describing your dream living room. I could picture it in my mind. Yes, even the goat--cute graphic at end. Your words flow smoothly with some scattered rhyme. I like the color scheme mentioned for your room. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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You did a great job describing your dream living room. I could picture it in my mind. Yes, even the goat--cute graphic at end. Your words flow smoothly with some scattered rhyme. I like the color scheme mentioned for your room. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Hi Jan! You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from amada
I like this line "like a forest without fairies..." I think this poem was part of a contest for 28 consecutive days. I guess this is the last one...too bad, I like the theme of the contest. you wrote precise and truthful descriptions in here.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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I like this line "like a forest without fairies..." I think this poem was part of a contest for 28 consecutive days. I guess this is the last one...too bad, I like the theme of the contest. you wrote precise and truthful descriptions in here.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Hi! National Poetry Writing Month is all 30-days of April. I have one poem left to write for the month. You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved this humorous write Alicia, especially the last line! You made me smile and this living room you describe sounds very fine and dandy, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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I loved this humorous write Alicia, especially the last line! You made me smile and this living room you describe sounds very fine and dandy, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Hi Dolly! You're nice. Thank you very much. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Your writing skills are beautiful. I wish your dreams come to reality; make it happen. You've written so well; my very best wishes. Cheers and kudos! Thumbs up!
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Your writing skills are beautiful. I wish your dreams come to reality; make it happen. You've written so well; my very best wishes. Cheers and kudos! Thumbs up!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Hi! You're very kind. Thank you.
Be blest :)
Comment from lyenochka
How fun! Loved the picture but it looks like a castle to me - not really like a forest or earthy. Enjoyed all the imagined luxurious living room and laughed at the pet goat!
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How fun! Loved the picture but it looks like a castle to me - not really like a forest or earthy. Enjoyed all the imagined luxurious living room and laughed at the pet goat!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Hiyah! You're nice. Thank you :)
