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Not Always

Will they live happily everafter?

2 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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What a great surprise of a story for the contest -- wonder job with the whole backstory and 'set up' for your ending!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
    Thank you for a great review. I like a little twist at the end.
Comment from January L'Angelle
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Very well penned. I really enjoyed this story. It was very descriptive and so smart! You didn't give anything away, until the last sentence and that was the big reveal. Bravo to you! Well done. Good on you! Respectfully, -January L.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the great review. I like a good twist at the end