O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is very well written my friend such a strong poem that has meaning and it is beautifully presented well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Yes this is very well written my friend such a strong poem that has meaning and it is beautifully presented well done regards Jill
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from Tina McKala
good poem, interesting choice of words, the attempt to be original is clear and I appreciate that, however I lack something, just the same way as i already wrote under some of your other poems.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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good poem, interesting choice of words, the attempt to be original is clear and I appreciate that, however I lack something, just the same way as i already wrote under some of your other poems.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from honeytree
The art work is really wonderful for these words.
Rain from above is a gift that helps
The growth of vegetables and fruit and all life forms.
The food we eat is given to us in God's special way.
Excellent writing.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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The art work is really wonderful for these words.
Rain from above is a gift that helps
The growth of vegetables and fruit and all life forms.
The food we eat is given to us in God's special way.
Excellent writing.
Honey tree
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from Sanku
i understood the first line.'grow life too i understood .the last line is rather strange .syllables and rhyming excwllent.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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i understood the first line.'grow life too i understood .the last line is rather strange .syllables and rhyming excwllent.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR THIS REVIEW.
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
God speaks through all of nature. Man could see and hear His words if he only had enough faith. Beautiful artwork. Good ending rhymes. I count 5-7-7 syllable lines. Enjoyed.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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God speaks through all of nature. Man could see and hear His words if he only had enough faith. Beautiful artwork. Good ending rhymes. I count 5-7-7 syllable lines. Enjoyed.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR LOVABLE REVIEW.
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You are very welcome. MN :)
Comment from sunnilicious
Raindrops can be so wonderful. I never thought of God as a muse before, but he must a good sense of humor. This is a nice poem. Enjoyable to read. Excellent.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Raindrops can be so wonderful. I never thought of God as a muse before, but he must a good sense of humor. This is a nice poem. Enjoyable to read. Excellent.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
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Comment from Allison78
I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem! I especially love the first libe, it conjures such a beautiful image. Well written and a pleasure to read, great job!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem! I especially love the first libe, it conjures such a beautiful image. Well written and a pleasure to read, great job!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
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Comment from isurp
Your 5-7-7 format has a perfect syllable count and I really like the rhyming combination of: glow, blow, and flow. Thanks for sharing this creation.
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Your 5-7-7 format has a perfect syllable count and I really like the rhyming combination of: glow, blow, and flow. Thanks for sharing this creation.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR EXCELLENT REVIEW.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Rain drops speak God's glow << Okay, that works.
Grow life, move His ceaseless blow << Yes, rain grows life, but what is God's ceaseless "blow"? Wind? THat moves plant life, not the other way around.
Muse Lord mute; round message flow. << First half sort of makes sense; second half makes no sense at all.
I really can't figure out what you mean by this, but I give everyone fives because stars are stupid and I refuse to use the system.
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Rain drops speak God's glow << Okay, that works.
Grow life, move His ceaseless blow << Yes, rain grows life, but what is God's ceaseless "blow"? Wind? THat moves plant life, not the other way around.
Muse Lord mute; round message flow. << First half sort of makes sense; second half makes no sense at all.
I really can't figure out what you mean by this, but I give everyone fives because stars are stupid and I refuse to use the system.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR EXCELLENT REVIEW.
Comment from vkmack
Just a beautiful first line. Lovely and fresh with the remainder of the poem baring out the love of God. This is such great work. Looking forward to the next one. Really like your work.
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Just a beautiful first line. Lovely and fresh with the remainder of the poem baring out the love of God. This is such great work. Looking forward to the next one. Really like your work.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR NICE REVIEW.
